A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
...who worked with Rihanna for most of her music videos. – Give some examples of other videos he worked with Rihanna on, so this information is verifiable
It ends a sentence. Right now, it shows "criticized Rihanna for "cold, calculated execution of murder" in the video, The council disagreed...". There should be a period (.) at the end of "video" because "The council disagreed" is a seperate sentence. -
Rp0211(talk2me)17:03, 5 August 2011 (UTC)reply
Are you sure no other references are missing parameters?Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!
Based on my review, I believe there aren't any other issues. If you do see issues though, please tell me. I am human, and I do make mistakes occasionally. -
Rp0211(talk2me)17:03, 5 August 2011 (UTC)reply
okay, i just added some work, publisher and accessdates to a few.
Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!
Overall review
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put this article on hold at this time. There are a few minor issues above which are affecting the prose quality of the article. Other than that, the only major problem I see is the formatting of sources in the "References" section. I will give you the general seven days to address these issues and/or debate the issues you believe do not affect GA status until a consensus on all issues is reached. When you have addressed an issue, please use the {{
done}} template to indicate which issues you have fixed. If you need help or have any questions, please feel free to ask. -
Rp0211(talk2me)18:50, 4 August 2011 (UTC)reply
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
...who worked with Rihanna for most of her music videos. – Give some examples of other videos he worked with Rihanna on, so this information is verifiable
It ends a sentence. Right now, it shows "criticized Rihanna for "cold, calculated execution of murder" in the video, The council disagreed...". There should be a period (.) at the end of "video" because "The council disagreed" is a seperate sentence. -
Rp0211(talk2me)17:03, 5 August 2011 (UTC)reply
Are you sure no other references are missing parameters?Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!
Based on my review, I believe there aren't any other issues. If you do see issues though, please tell me. I am human, and I do make mistakes occasionally. -
Rp0211(talk2me)17:03, 5 August 2011 (UTC)reply
okay, i just added some work, publisher and accessdates to a few.
Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!
Overall review
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put this article on hold at this time. There are a few minor issues above which are affecting the prose quality of the article. Other than that, the only major problem I see is the formatting of sources in the "References" section. I will give you the general seven days to address these issues and/or debate the issues you believe do not affect GA status until a consensus on all issues is reached. When you have addressed an issue, please use the {{
done}} template to indicate which issues you have fixed. If you need help or have any questions, please feel free to ask. -
Rp0211(talk2me)18:50, 4 August 2011 (UTC)reply