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You may remove "rock" and leave it only with "band"
It was released → It was made available (to avoid word repetitions)
Add a comma after "studio album"
remix of single → remix of the single
add year of release in brackets after the song's title
The composition → The recording
remove "electronica"
and by No Doubt → remove "by" here
song, the lyrics → song, its lyrics
music critics. Several critics pointed → music critics, with several of them pointing out
others criticized → others criticizing
Infobox
Album Version → album version
Background and composition
The song was recorded → The track was recorded (to avoid word repetitions)
set "exclusively" before "released"
Set release year in brackets after song's title.
interlude, accompanied → interlude, which is accompanied
Set comma after "seventh studio album"
Stefani turns → The singer turns (word repetition)
Critical reception
disliked the track's → disliked the song's (word rep.)
it and Rockwell's → it and American singer Rockwell's
Add a comma after "PopMatters"
Credits and personnel
Credits and personnel adapted from Rock Steady liner notes, Interscope Records → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Rock Steady.
Release history
Unlink format and and label
Interscope Records → Interscope
Outcome
I've put this On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing and don't forget to ping me when you're ready with this. Best,
Cartoon network freak (
talk) 00:08, 17 September 2016 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
This is the
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Making Out (song) article. This is
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Electronic music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Electronic music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Electronic musicWikipedia:WikiProject Electronic musicTemplate:WikiProject Electronic musicelectronic music articles
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
songs on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SongsWikipedia:WikiProject SongsTemplate:WikiProject Songssong articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Women in Music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
You may remove "rock" and leave it only with "band"
It was released → It was made available (to avoid word repetitions)
Add a comma after "studio album"
remix of single → remix of the single
add year of release in brackets after the song's title
The composition → The recording
remove "electronica"
and by No Doubt → remove "by" here
song, the lyrics → song, its lyrics
music critics. Several critics pointed → music critics, with several of them pointing out
others criticized → others criticizing
Infobox
Album Version → album version
Background and composition
The song was recorded → The track was recorded (to avoid word repetitions)
set "exclusively" before "released"
Set release year in brackets after song's title.
interlude, accompanied → interlude, which is accompanied
Set comma after "seventh studio album"
Stefani turns → The singer turns (word repetition)
Critical reception
disliked the track's → disliked the song's (word rep.)
it and Rockwell's → it and American singer Rockwell's
Add a comma after "PopMatters"
Credits and personnel
Credits and personnel adapted from Rock Steady liner notes, Interscope Records → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Rock Steady.
Release history
Unlink format and and label
Interscope Records → Interscope
Outcome
I've put this On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing and don't forget to ping me when you're ready with this. Best,
Cartoon network freak (
talk) 00:08, 17 September 2016 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.