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Reviewer: Indrian ( talk · contribs) 00:06, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
Once again I am tardy on another review, but I will take this on as well. Indrian ( talk) 00:06, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
Sorry once again for the delay. I have given the article a thorough copyedit and made a couple of corrections. There is only one issue remaining: the one-time $700,000 Atari settlement is an untruth propagated by Bushnell. Business is Fun reveals the true settlement deal, backed by a copy of the actual settlement document reproduced in the book. Once this is fixed, we are good to go, so I will place this On hold. As for the name, I think "Magnavox Odyssey" is the most common rendering, so I would leave it as is. Indrian ( talk) 20:29, 24 May 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Indrian ( talk · contribs) 00:06, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
Once again I am tardy on another review, but I will take this on as well. Indrian ( talk) 00:06, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
Sorry once again for the delay. I have given the article a thorough copyedit and made a couple of corrections. There is only one issue remaining: the one-time $700,000 Atari settlement is an untruth propagated by Bushnell. Business is Fun reveals the true settlement deal, backed by a copy of the actual settlement document reproduced in the book. Once this is fixed, we are good to go, so I will place this On hold. As for the name, I think "Magnavox Odyssey" is the most common rendering, so I would leave it as is. Indrian ( talk) 20:29, 24 May 2016 (UTC)