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Hello Fram would you kindly point what are yours (main) concerns based in the "POV-Fan" and "Disputed" templates. I meant, personally I try to move with "edit summaries" and talk first (or later advise) in article's talk pages.
I'm not a native English-language speaker, and a copyedit is required, including word choices, considering the nature of the topic. And certainly we can also argue a contemporary artist (Whitney Houston i,g) could be referred in similar terms as "one of the artists" of "x situation" like Madonna, but here prose have sources and those aren't "hagiographies" or "Madonna-centered biographies" as far I can see.
Note many artist's wiki biographies (including FA/GAs) openly deals with social media metrics/impact; Madonna's main article doesn't and in this case, article tends to cover the areas she "impacted" based in both critical/popular perceptions (not mine opinion), or how also affected Madonna's public career. I'm curious about your point, therefore, how this can be improved. Thanks, -- Apoxyomenus ( talk) 09:20, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
Fram I like audits and to reach transparency. I also like others to make the assessment of the articles I create, not me. So in the meantime, once I have time I'll try to do my best in this space regarding the overall concerns and would be great if you are able to take the second look. Please note (while may I have missed some points) most sentences have author attributions as far I can see. Might this can sounds fanatic, but look at a comparative like this: "Prince, Michael Jackson, Madonna, Cyndi Lauper among others helped made MTV" to specifically find something like this: "How Michael Jackson redefined MTV?" or "How Madonna shaped MTV?". That's a comparative for how most points here are present in print sources (or online sources). How Madonna impacted media/formats and how media impacted Madonna. What were those criticisms and praises. Thanks, -- Apoxyomenus ( talk) 22:13, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
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Hello Fram would you kindly point what are yours (main) concerns based in the "POV-Fan" and "Disputed" templates. I meant, personally I try to move with "edit summaries" and talk first (or later advise) in article's talk pages.
I'm not a native English-language speaker, and a copyedit is required, including word choices, considering the nature of the topic. And certainly we can also argue a contemporary artist (Whitney Houston i,g) could be referred in similar terms as "one of the artists" of "x situation" like Madonna, but here prose have sources and those aren't "hagiographies" or "Madonna-centered biographies" as far I can see.
Note many artist's wiki biographies (including FA/GAs) openly deals with social media metrics/impact; Madonna's main article doesn't and in this case, article tends to cover the areas she "impacted" based in both critical/popular perceptions (not mine opinion), or how also affected Madonna's public career. I'm curious about your point, therefore, how this can be improved. Thanks, -- Apoxyomenus ( talk) 09:20, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
Fram I like audits and to reach transparency. I also like others to make the assessment of the articles I create, not me. So in the meantime, once I have time I'll try to do my best in this space regarding the overall concerns and would be great if you are able to take the second look. Please note (while may I have missed some points) most sentences have author attributions as far I can see. Might this can sounds fanatic, but look at a comparative like this: "Prince, Michael Jackson, Madonna, Cyndi Lauper among others helped made MTV" to specifically find something like this: "How Michael Jackson redefined MTV?" or "How Madonna shaped MTV?". That's a comparative for how most points here are present in print sources (or online sources). How Madonna impacted media/formats and how media impacted Madonna. What were those criticisms and praises. Thanks, -- Apoxyomenus ( talk) 22:13, 17 October 2023 (UTC)