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Intro

Valetude, I returned the intro because I did not understand why the intro needed to be shortened. It was not excessively long.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 17:22, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Moved from my talk page, so that others could weigh-in either way:
Re your reversion of my suggested lede. The current lede bulks-up to almost a quarter of the length of the main article. Six or seven percent is usually adequate to establish notability. I have received many messages of thanks from editors for condensing lede-sections down to the essentials. Valetude ( talk) 18:42, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply
And, Valetude, I have been performing GA reviews where the introductions are too short. Perhaps we can meet in the middle?– CaroleHenson ( talk) 18:53, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply
I would be happy to compare the two introductions and add what I think are the best things to keep in the intro... and remove the rest.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 19:02, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply
Do that. Valetude ( talk) 19:04, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply
 Done This is the diff between your version and the current version.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 19:36, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Intro

Valetude, I returned the intro because I did not understand why the intro needed to be shortened. It was not excessively long.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 17:22, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Moved from my talk page, so that others could weigh-in either way:
Re your reversion of my suggested lede. The current lede bulks-up to almost a quarter of the length of the main article. Six or seven percent is usually adequate to establish notability. I have received many messages of thanks from editors for condensing lede-sections down to the essentials. Valetude ( talk) 18:42, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply
And, Valetude, I have been performing GA reviews where the introductions are too short. Perhaps we can meet in the middle?– CaroleHenson ( talk) 18:53, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply
I would be happy to compare the two introductions and add what I think are the best things to keep in the intro... and remove the rest.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 19:02, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply
Do that. Valetude ( talk) 19:04, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply
 Done This is the diff between your version and the current version.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 19:36, 18 April 2020 (UTC) reply

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