In infobox, why is UK and Saudi linked and other countries not? What's the strategy?
a brainfart I suppose. Unlinked - I normally link the
United Kingdom, but there's no need to link the
United Kingdom here.
"Initially operated" missing a subject.
see below
Or that sentence needs to use a comma instead of a full stop.
Done - I prefer this to a minor reword
"pronounced a success" by what measure?
Lack of teething troubles, as explained by the following two sentences
"from Hamburg, Germany to" comma after Germany.
Done Ah, the Oxford comma again
"San Pedro - New York - Hamburg" en-dashes, not hyphens.
Done
"America at San Pedro, Los Angeles.[14]" overlinked.
Done - wl removed
Subsection headings of "History" section should be in italics if ship names.
Done
"In summer 1940" avoid seasons as they differ in timing depending on where you are in the world.
Difficult one this, the quoted book source only states "summer", which means June 21 to September 20. Missourian had been reflagged to the UK by 19 July. Have wikilinked summer.
"arrived at Liverpool, Lancashire on " comma before on
Done
"was London. The" no need to link major geographical locations.
Done unlinked
"and Code Letters" caps again?
As above
"the Clyde on" needs clarification as the fact this is in Glasgow and why the ship was there.
@
The Rambling Man: - Thank you for your review. I've been through the article and made most of the amendments you suggested. Have explained why where I've not made an amendment. Let me know if there's anything else that needs adjustment.
Mjroots (
talk) 13:18, 16 May 2021 (UTC)reply
In infobox, why is UK and Saudi linked and other countries not? What's the strategy?
a brainfart I suppose. Unlinked - I normally link the
United Kingdom, but there's no need to link the
United Kingdom here.
"Initially operated" missing a subject.
see below
Or that sentence needs to use a comma instead of a full stop.
Done - I prefer this to a minor reword
"pronounced a success" by what measure?
Lack of teething troubles, as explained by the following two sentences
"from Hamburg, Germany to" comma after Germany.
Done Ah, the Oxford comma again
"San Pedro - New York - Hamburg" en-dashes, not hyphens.
Done
"America at San Pedro, Los Angeles.[14]" overlinked.
Done - wl removed
Subsection headings of "History" section should be in italics if ship names.
Done
"In summer 1940" avoid seasons as they differ in timing depending on where you are in the world.
Difficult one this, the quoted book source only states "summer", which means June 21 to September 20. Missourian had been reflagged to the UK by 19 July. Have wikilinked summer.
"arrived at Liverpool, Lancashire on " comma before on
Done
"was London. The" no need to link major geographical locations.
Done unlinked
"and Code Letters" caps again?
As above
"the Clyde on" needs clarification as the fact this is in Glasgow and why the ship was there.
@
The Rambling Man: - Thank you for your review. I've been through the article and made most of the amendments you suggested. Have explained why where I've not made an amendment. Let me know if there's anything else that needs adjustment.
Mjroots (
talk) 13:18, 16 May 2021 (UTC)reply