"Released by Fonovisa Records on May 24, 2011, it was recorded before a live audience at the Hollywood Palladium in Los Angeles, California, on February 8, 2011." - shouldn't it be the other way around? - It was recorded before a live audience at the Hollywood Palladium in Los Angeles, California, on February 8, 2011 and released by Fonovisa Records on May 24, 2011. - that is the chronlogy.
"with Juanes and Zack de la Rocha being selected by the band for their immigration rights advocacy." - I don't understand this and I don't see it explained in the article.
"entering the top-five in the Billboard Top Latin Albums in the United States, aside from becoming the twenty-third number-one album by the band" - don't think "aside" is the right word - Top Latin Albums in the United States, and became the twenty-third number-one album ?
"In preparation to the show, the band sent a list of the songs that their fans have most requested through their career to their featured performers and asked them each to choose the song that better fit their own repertoire." - clumsy wording - and don't understand what "asked them each to choose the song that better fit their own repertoire" means.
"selected by the band due their work for immigration rights" - still don't understand what this means.
Immigration rights in the United States is a very important issue for the band, so they were pleased to include another artist that advocate for the cause...
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02:12, 21 January 2012 (UTC)reply
Singles
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Critical reception and accolades
"They also praised the band on their songs performed by themselves," - I don't understand this
"Released by Fonovisa Records on May 24, 2011, it was recorded before a live audience at the Hollywood Palladium in Los Angeles, California, on February 8, 2011." - shouldn't it be the other way around? - It was recorded before a live audience at the Hollywood Palladium in Los Angeles, California, on February 8, 2011 and released by Fonovisa Records on May 24, 2011. - that is the chronlogy.
"with Juanes and Zack de la Rocha being selected by the band for their immigration rights advocacy." - I don't understand this and I don't see it explained in the article.
"entering the top-five in the Billboard Top Latin Albums in the United States, aside from becoming the twenty-third number-one album by the band" - don't think "aside" is the right word - Top Latin Albums in the United States, and became the twenty-third number-one album ?
"In preparation to the show, the band sent a list of the songs that their fans have most requested through their career to their featured performers and asked them each to choose the song that better fit their own repertoire." - clumsy wording - and don't understand what "asked them each to choose the song that better fit their own repertoire" means.
"selected by the band due their work for immigration rights" - still don't understand what this means.
Immigration rights in the United States is a very important issue for the band, so they were pleased to include another artist that advocate for the cause...
Jaespinoza (
talk)
02:12, 21 January 2012 (UTC)reply
Singles
I copy edited this section. Please change any mistakes I may have made.
Critical reception and accolades
"They also praised the band on their songs performed by themselves," - I don't understand this