"for the 2020 CONCACAF Champions League and 2020 Campeones Cup." - and the
Fixed.
Road to the final
"The 2019 season was the 24th in MLS history," - This fact is not mentioned in the "MLS releases 2019 regular-season schedule" source from MLS. An alternative source is needed for this instance
Fixed.
"facing each team in the same conference twice and teams in the other conference once." - try not to use the same word twice in the same sentence
Fixed.
Seattle Sounders FC
The acroynms of Los Angeles FC should be mentioned in parentheses since its full name is not mentioned elsewhere
Fixed.
Designated Player should be wikilinked in this section and not in the Toronto FC sub-section
Fixed.
Toronto FC
"from Richie Laryea and Jonathan Osorio. Osorio added his second" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this
The acroynms of New York City FC should be mentioned in parentheses since the club's full name is not mentioned anywhere else
Fixed.
"to equalize for Toronto; the Reds completed their 2–1 upset victory" - try not to use wording such as "The Reds"
Trying to avoid using Toronto too frequently, and "the Reds" is a common nickname for the team.
Venue and preparations
"including 3,000 allocated to away fans by Major League Soccer." - the text in bold should be written as MLS for consistency with using the league's acroynms after its full name's first mention
Fixed by using "the league" to emphasize that it came from the league's front office.
"Prices for tickets on secondary markets peaked at an average of $622," - is the prices of these tickets notable for any reason to merit inclusion?
The next part of the sentence explains its notability, as it surpassed almost every other mainstream events in Seattle.
"arriving via a state ferries" - As a British writer, I am not so sure whether this portion of text is gramatically correct in American English or whether there words missing from it
It was incorrect, and I have rewritten the sentence.
"The Univision boadcast averaged" - typo; should be spelt as broadcast
Fixed.
Summary
"but his shot was unable to beat goalkeeper" - go past
Fixed.
Post-match
"for the largest sporting event at the stadium and largest soccer attendance in state history." - repetition of the word "largest"
Fixed.
"the Sounders earned a berth in the 2020 CONCACAF Champions League, despite having already qualified as the highest-ranked regular season team without a berth." - repetition of the word "berth"
"for the 2020 CONCACAF Champions League and 2020 Campeones Cup." - and the
Fixed.
Road to the final
"The 2019 season was the 24th in MLS history," - This fact is not mentioned in the "MLS releases 2019 regular-season schedule" source from MLS. An alternative source is needed for this instance
Fixed.
"facing each team in the same conference twice and teams in the other conference once." - try not to use the same word twice in the same sentence
Fixed.
Seattle Sounders FC
The acroynms of Los Angeles FC should be mentioned in parentheses since its full name is not mentioned elsewhere
Fixed.
Designated Player should be wikilinked in this section and not in the Toronto FC sub-section
Fixed.
Toronto FC
"from Richie Laryea and Jonathan Osorio. Osorio added his second" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this
The acroynms of New York City FC should be mentioned in parentheses since the club's full name is not mentioned anywhere else
Fixed.
"to equalize for Toronto; the Reds completed their 2–1 upset victory" - try not to use wording such as "The Reds"
Trying to avoid using Toronto too frequently, and "the Reds" is a common nickname for the team.
Venue and preparations
"including 3,000 allocated to away fans by Major League Soccer." - the text in bold should be written as MLS for consistency with using the league's acroynms after its full name's first mention
Fixed by using "the league" to emphasize that it came from the league's front office.
"Prices for tickets on secondary markets peaked at an average of $622," - is the prices of these tickets notable for any reason to merit inclusion?
The next part of the sentence explains its notability, as it surpassed almost every other mainstream events in Seattle.
"arriving via a state ferries" - As a British writer, I am not so sure whether this portion of text is gramatically correct in American English or whether there words missing from it
It was incorrect, and I have rewritten the sentence.
"The Univision boadcast averaged" - typo; should be spelt as broadcast
Fixed.
Summary
"but his shot was unable to beat goalkeeper" - go past
Fixed.
Post-match
"for the largest sporting event at the stadium and largest soccer attendance in state history." - repetition of the word "largest"
Fixed.
"the Sounders earned a berth in the 2020 CONCACAF Champions League, despite having already qualified as the highest-ranked regular season team without a berth." - repetition of the word "berth"