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"The match also marks the first time that two teams coached by managers from Latin America will face each other in the MLS Cup final;" - marked and faced
Fixed.
"The defending MLS Cup champions are Toronto FC," - were
Fixed.
Atlanta United FC
"on the last day of the season left Atlanta" - try season's last day
Changed it to "final day of the season", which I felt was more natural.
"Both players were also finalists for the league MVP award" - spell out MVP and include the acroyms in parentheses
Fixed.
"was named MLS Coach of the Year and announced in October 2018 that he plans to leave the club" - of his plans
Fixed.
Portland Timbers
"three playoff championships in the second-division North American Soccer League," - North American Soccer League should have its acroynms in parentheses since its mentioned later in the article
Since the other mention of NASL is a separate league/entity, I've expanded that acronym out.
"due to construction at Providence Park," - What kind of construction?
Changed to "expansion project"; don't feel like more detail is necessary.
"Portland won 2–1 on two goals by Diego Valeri" - on a brace
I prefer to use terms that are recognizable to those outside the sport.
"the Timbers lost their aggregate led" - typo; lead
Fixed.
Broadcasting
"Fox's broadcast was lead by" - led
Fixed.
Summary
Wikilink MLS Referee of the Year Award and New England Revolution
Done.
Post-match
Perhaps add links to the jobs of Governor of Georgia and the Mayor of Atlanta to their respective lists?
I'd rather not create walls of blue links here.
"and culminated in outgoing coach Tata Martino" - Should that be Gerardo Martino as has been done earlier in the article.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
"The match also marks the first time that two teams coached by managers from Latin America will face each other in the MLS Cup final;" - marked and faced
Fixed.
"The defending MLS Cup champions are Toronto FC," - were
Fixed.
Atlanta United FC
"on the last day of the season left Atlanta" - try season's last day
Changed it to "final day of the season", which I felt was more natural.
"Both players were also finalists for the league MVP award" - spell out MVP and include the acroyms in parentheses
Fixed.
"was named MLS Coach of the Year and announced in October 2018 that he plans to leave the club" - of his plans
Fixed.
Portland Timbers
"three playoff championships in the second-division North American Soccer League," - North American Soccer League should have its acroynms in parentheses since its mentioned later in the article
Since the other mention of NASL is a separate league/entity, I've expanded that acronym out.
"due to construction at Providence Park," - What kind of construction?
Changed to "expansion project"; don't feel like more detail is necessary.
"Portland won 2–1 on two goals by Diego Valeri" - on a brace
I prefer to use terms that are recognizable to those outside the sport.
"the Timbers lost their aggregate led" - typo; lead
Fixed.
Broadcasting
"Fox's broadcast was lead by" - led
Fixed.
Summary
Wikilink MLS Referee of the Year Award and New England Revolution
Done.
Post-match
Perhaps add links to the jobs of Governor of Georgia and the Mayor of Atlanta to their respective lists?
I'd rather not create walls of blue links here.
"and culminated in outgoing coach Tata Martino" - Should that be Gerardo Martino as has been done earlier in the article.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.