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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that there were technical issues with the performance of "Luna" by the Colombian singer
Feid at the
2024 Copa América opening ceremony?
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"It is the second song on which Villada collaborates with an American hip hop producer after "Le Pido a Dios" with
DJ Premier, so it was" → "The second song on which Villada collaborates with an American hip hop producer after "Le Pido a Dios" with
DJ Premier, it was" and make this the sentence directly after the writers/producers
"An accompanying music video, directed by Sebastián Sánchez and released on March 6, 2024" → "An accompanying
music video, directed by Sebastián Sánchez and released on March 6, 2024," with the wikilink
Are you sure this shouldn't be titled Background and composition?
Not done Yes, 69,886% sure. The way in which the information about the composition and the observation of the Argentine Billboard staff is presented could prevent it from being called "composition" instead of "critical reception".
Santi (
talk)
17:35, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
The opening sentence reads weirdly and should say in the order that he released his first EP Sixdo as a surprise release through Universal Music Latino
Not done I don't understand your pov. If you mean mentioning the album first and then the EP, I don't think that's a good idea. It is this way because the EP has a collaboration with a hip hop producer, a characteristic that this song also shares, so the background starts from there. Further back, that is, Feliz Cumpleaños Ferxxo..., has no direct or indirect connection with the song.
Santi (
talk)
17:35, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Write quadruple platinum instead and mention this was in the US
Not done I think the fact that such information appears in a paragraph focused exclusively on commercial perf in the US gives that enough sense.
Santi (
talk)
17:47, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
"outside the United States compared" → "outside the US compared" per
MOS:US
Pollosito Upon further assessment, I would suggest to replace with prose since this is not many awards and also, you missed changing 4x Platinum to quadruple platinum. --
K. Peake20:21, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake, one more thing, I hope not bother. Before pass or fail, I would like to ask if there is one interesting piece of information in this article that I can give for DYK, because from my perspective, I'm not sure or there really isn't any. It's to avoid screwing up just in case.
Santi (
talk)
21:13, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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... that the Colombian singer
Feid collaborated for the second time with an American hip hop producer in "Luna", and it was called "an effort to take the genre to the global level"?
@
Miraclepine: That's what I meant, only for me adding another alt and having it approved is equivalent to changing it in some way. I'm sorry for making you think I was literally going to change what's above. Well, here it goes: ALT1: ... that the Colombian singer
Feid performed "Luna" as the only song at the
2024 Copa América opening ceremony, but there were several technical issues in the transmission?
Santi (
talk)
20:24, 21 June 2024 (UTC)reply
A request has been made for this article to be
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that there were technical issues with the performance of "Luna" by the Colombian singer
Feid at the
2024 Copa América opening ceremony?
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songs on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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"It is the second song on which Villada collaborates with an American hip hop producer after "Le Pido a Dios" with
DJ Premier, so it was" → "The second song on which Villada collaborates with an American hip hop producer after "Le Pido a Dios" with
DJ Premier, it was" and make this the sentence directly after the writers/producers
"An accompanying music video, directed by Sebastián Sánchez and released on March 6, 2024" → "An accompanying
music video, directed by Sebastián Sánchez and released on March 6, 2024," with the wikilink
Are you sure this shouldn't be titled Background and composition?
Not done Yes, 69,886% sure. The way in which the information about the composition and the observation of the Argentine Billboard staff is presented could prevent it from being called "composition" instead of "critical reception".
Santi (
talk)
17:35, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
The opening sentence reads weirdly and should say in the order that he released his first EP Sixdo as a surprise release through Universal Music Latino
Not done I don't understand your pov. If you mean mentioning the album first and then the EP, I don't think that's a good idea. It is this way because the EP has a collaboration with a hip hop producer, a characteristic that this song also shares, so the background starts from there. Further back, that is, Feliz Cumpleaños Ferxxo..., has no direct or indirect connection with the song.
Santi (
talk)
17:35, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Write quadruple platinum instead and mention this was in the US
Not done I think the fact that such information appears in a paragraph focused exclusively on commercial perf in the US gives that enough sense.
Santi (
talk)
17:47, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
"outside the United States compared" → "outside the US compared" per
MOS:US
Pollosito Upon further assessment, I would suggest to replace with prose since this is not many awards and also, you missed changing 4x Platinum to quadruple platinum. --
K. Peake20:21, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake, one more thing, I hope not bother. Before pass or fail, I would like to ask if there is one interesting piece of information in this article that I can give for DYK, because from my perspective, I'm not sure or there really isn't any. It's to avoid screwing up just in case.
Santi (
talk)
21:13, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
... that the Colombian singer
Feid collaborated for the second time with an American hip hop producer in "Luna", and it was called "an effort to take the genre to the global level"?
@
Miraclepine: That's what I meant, only for me adding another alt and having it approved is equivalent to changing it in some way. I'm sorry for making you think I was literally going to change what's above. Well, here it goes: ALT1: ... that the Colombian singer
Feid performed "Luna" as the only song at the
2024 Copa América opening ceremony, but there were several technical issues in the transmission?
Santi (
talk)
20:24, 21 June 2024 (UTC)reply