Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
Marcellus was elected consul twice, first under Domitian and later under Hadrian. suggest listing years of consulship; combine with beginning of second paragraph in lead.
Done.
Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall. suggest:
Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal from the Antonine Wall to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall.
Done.
he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless. suggest:
. He he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless.
The sentence doesn't make sense then.
The frontier was withdrawn to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation. suggest:
The frontier was withdrawn from the Antonine Wall to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation.
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Iazyges: Hi. That was prompt as usual. Thanks. 3 out of 4 prose suggestions implemented. If you meant to pass this as a GA - I think that you did - then you forgot to alter the header.
Gog the Mild (
talk)
17:54, 29 August 2018 (UTC)reply
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
Marcellus was elected consul twice, first under Domitian and later under Hadrian. suggest listing years of consulship; combine with beginning of second paragraph in lead.
Done.
Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall. suggest:
Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal from the Antonine Wall to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall.
Done.
he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless. suggest:
. He he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless.
The sentence doesn't make sense then.
The frontier was withdrawn to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation. suggest:
The frontier was withdrawn from the Antonine Wall to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation.
@
Iazyges: Hi. That was prompt as usual. Thanks. 3 out of 4 prose suggestions implemented. If you meant to pass this as a GA - I think that you did - then you forgot to alter the header.
Gog the Mild (
talk)
17:54, 29 August 2018 (UTC)reply