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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 23:35, 5 January 2015 (UTC)
I'll review this. I will try to have some notes tonight, but I will probably not be able to complete the review for a day or two.
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-- The prose is good enough; I tweaked a couple of things -- please revert if I screwed anything up. The sources look good. I don't have any of them so can't check for close paraphrasing. The images are OK; can't say I'm crazy about the quality, but that's not your fault. The clip from the song is OK because there's no separate article about the song itself, though if you do create that article I think the clip should be removed from this article. I had a look on newspapers.com for reviews and found nothing worth adding. I'll place the nomination on hold while you respond to my questions above. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 05:00, 8 January 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 23:35, 5 January 2015 (UTC)
I'll review this. I will try to have some notes tonight, but I will probably not be able to complete the review for a day or two.
Mike Christie (
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23:35, 5 January 2015 (UTC)
-- The prose is good enough; I tweaked a couple of things -- please revert if I screwed anything up. The sources look good. I don't have any of them so can't check for close paraphrasing. The images are OK; can't say I'm crazy about the quality, but that's not your fault. The clip from the song is OK because there's no separate article about the song itself, though if you do create that article I think the clip should be removed from this article. I had a look on newspapers.com for reviews and found nothing worth adding. I'll place the nomination on hold while you respond to my questions above. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 05:00, 8 January 2015 (UTC)