There's too many sentences with "the song" - needs a variety
Why does "Following the release of "Loverboy"," is the first sentence of "Background and release"? Shouldn't it be who wrote it? who produced it? who mixed it? etc
Also there's nothing in "Background and release" about the singles' release. Maybe considering on renaming this section would be suitable as it is largely based on Carey's hospitalization and criticism that followed.
In "Composition" why is "Hook" capitalized?
"Loverboy" is reminiscent of several of Carey ---> "Loverboy" is reminiscent of several of Carey's
The
Hartford Courant is a newspaper, so why isn't it in italics?
""Loverboy" was me with generally mixed reviews from music critics;" - maybe this was left over when someone had vandalized the article.
"in most major countries" - what is considered a "major country"?
Per
WP:ORDINAL (numbers greater than nine are commonly rendered in numerals) "On July 29, 2001, "Loverboy" debuted at number sixty-five" would need to be "On July 29, 2001, "Loverboy" debuted at number 65". Also with the next sentence and all others in this section.
Can you please fix the lead, the three paragraphs now have "Loverboy" - needs a variety (Try variations like: The track, The single, The recording, It)
Reference checking
FN#19's title needs to be "Raidió Teilifís Éireann > Music Review > Mariah Carey - Glitter"
FN#25's title needs to be "RIAA > Certifications > Mariah Carey"
FN#38 be consistent in weather or not you wikilink
Tribune Company (compare with FN#11)
FN#56 is the publisher Nielsen Business Media, Inc? or is it Prometheus Global media on FN#55? (If you take FN#55, which should be the publisher, make sure that media is capitalize to Media)
There's too many sentences with "the song" - needs a variety
Why does "Following the release of "Loverboy"," is the first sentence of "Background and release"? Shouldn't it be who wrote it? who produced it? who mixed it? etc
Also there's nothing in "Background and release" about the singles' release. Maybe considering on renaming this section would be suitable as it is largely based on Carey's hospitalization and criticism that followed.
In "Composition" why is "Hook" capitalized?
"Loverboy" is reminiscent of several of Carey ---> "Loverboy" is reminiscent of several of Carey's
The
Hartford Courant is a newspaper, so why isn't it in italics?
""Loverboy" was me with generally mixed reviews from music critics;" - maybe this was left over when someone had vandalized the article.
"in most major countries" - what is considered a "major country"?
Per
WP:ORDINAL (numbers greater than nine are commonly rendered in numerals) "On July 29, 2001, "Loverboy" debuted at number sixty-five" would need to be "On July 29, 2001, "Loverboy" debuted at number 65". Also with the next sentence and all others in this section.
Can you please fix the lead, the three paragraphs now have "Loverboy" - needs a variety (Try variations like: The track, The single, The recording, It)
Reference checking
FN#19's title needs to be "Raidió Teilifís Éireann > Music Review > Mariah Carey - Glitter"
FN#25's title needs to be "RIAA > Certifications > Mariah Carey"
FN#38 be consistent in weather or not you wikilink
Tribune Company (compare with FN#11)
FN#56 is the publisher Nielsen Business Media, Inc? or is it Prometheus Global media on FN#55? (If you take FN#55, which should be the publisher, make sure that media is capitalize to Media)