""Love on Top" consists of six key changes." I think it would be better if you moved this phrase to the end of the first paragraph, were you talk about Knowles' rarely used high range. DoneJivesh •
Talk2Me05:17, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply
"After Knowles' performance of "Love on top" at the 2011 MTV Video Music Awards" -> "After Knowles' performance at the 2011 MTV Video Music Awards". You already talked about the performance, so there is no point to repeat the song title again. But, if you feel or decide to keep it: "Love on top" -> "Love on Top".
""Love on Top" also appeared at number 75 on the UK Singles Chart and at number 14 on the New Zealand Singles Chart in early September 2011." -> ""Love on Top" also appeared at number seventy-five on the UK Singles Chart and at number fourteen on the New Zealand Singles Chart in early September 2011."
""Love on Top" was written by Beyoncé Knowles, Terius Nash and Shea Taylor and was produced by Knowles and Taylor." - > ""Love on Top" was written by Beyoncé Knowles, Terius Nash and Shea Taylor, while song production was done by Knowles and Taylor." DoneJivesh •
Talk2Me05:17, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply
I did it although i think the previous title was the best as critics laid much emphasis on the music style. 05:17, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
Critical reception
"Eric Henderson of Slant Magazine gave "Love on Top" a positive review". Every review before this one has been positive. Why specify that he gave a positive review to the song? He gave the album a negative review? (I hope you understood what I'm saying :) ). FixedJivesh •
Talk2Me17:31, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply
"Adam Markovitz of Entertainment Weekly compared Knowles' work on "Love on Top" to that of past idols such as Luther Vandross and Diana Ross, but felt the tone overshadowed Knowles' style, stating "she gets lost in her idols' polyester-swathed shadows."" This is the only one that sounds mixed... If it really is, I think you should note this one as mixed, instead of noting the review above as positive. DoneJivesh •
Talk2Me17:31, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Chart performance
You used the same url for the three references about South Korea's Gaon chart.
Ok, about the picture. It isn't a screenshot. It looks like a professional copyrighted picture. I can tell because
this is the actual screenshot, and
this is copyrighted to Jeff Kravitz and FilmMagic. Either remove this or replace with the actual screenshot.
I don't know where... :( I couldn't watch the VMAs and I'm dying to see the performance. I found this screencapture at Google, but it actually is a screencapture. -
Sauloviegas (
talk)
09:29, 8 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Since the song now has a confirmed radio date, thus making it a single, I think that this review should be closed, or at least put on hold for a while. A lot more information will be added within the next few weeks/month(s). —
Status {talkcontribs21:40, 6 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Beyonce's team does so everytime. So please zip it up now. I am just fed up of you. I do not want to be rude but you are making my blood boil. Seriously. This is too much.
Jivesh •
Talk2Me19:37, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply
""Love on Top" consists of six key changes." I think it would be better if you moved this phrase to the end of the first paragraph, were you talk about Knowles' rarely used high range. DoneJivesh •
Talk2Me05:17, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply
"After Knowles' performance of "Love on top" at the 2011 MTV Video Music Awards" -> "After Knowles' performance at the 2011 MTV Video Music Awards". You already talked about the performance, so there is no point to repeat the song title again. But, if you feel or decide to keep it: "Love on top" -> "Love on Top".
""Love on Top" also appeared at number 75 on the UK Singles Chart and at number 14 on the New Zealand Singles Chart in early September 2011." -> ""Love on Top" also appeared at number seventy-five on the UK Singles Chart and at number fourteen on the New Zealand Singles Chart in early September 2011."
""Love on Top" was written by Beyoncé Knowles, Terius Nash and Shea Taylor and was produced by Knowles and Taylor." - > ""Love on Top" was written by Beyoncé Knowles, Terius Nash and Shea Taylor, while song production was done by Knowles and Taylor." DoneJivesh •
Talk2Me05:17, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply
I did it although i think the previous title was the best as critics laid much emphasis on the music style. 05:17, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
Critical reception
"Eric Henderson of Slant Magazine gave "Love on Top" a positive review". Every review before this one has been positive. Why specify that he gave a positive review to the song? He gave the album a negative review? (I hope you understood what I'm saying :) ). FixedJivesh •
Talk2Me17:31, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply
"Adam Markovitz of Entertainment Weekly compared Knowles' work on "Love on Top" to that of past idols such as Luther Vandross and Diana Ross, but felt the tone overshadowed Knowles' style, stating "she gets lost in her idols' polyester-swathed shadows."" This is the only one that sounds mixed... If it really is, I think you should note this one as mixed, instead of noting the review above as positive. DoneJivesh •
Talk2Me17:31, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Chart performance
You used the same url for the three references about South Korea's Gaon chart.
Ok, about the picture. It isn't a screenshot. It looks like a professional copyrighted picture. I can tell because
this is the actual screenshot, and
this is copyrighted to Jeff Kravitz and FilmMagic. Either remove this or replace with the actual screenshot.
I don't know where... :( I couldn't watch the VMAs and I'm dying to see the performance. I found this screencapture at Google, but it actually is a screencapture. -
Sauloviegas (
talk)
09:29, 8 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Since the song now has a confirmed radio date, thus making it a single, I think that this review should be closed, or at least put on hold for a while. A lot more information will be added within the next few weeks/month(s). —
Status {talkcontribs21:40, 6 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Beyonce's team does so everytime. So please zip it up now. I am just fed up of you. I do not want to be rude but you are making my blood boil. Seriously. This is too much.
Jivesh •
Talk2Me19:37, 7 September 2011 (UTC)reply