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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
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I've added a "that" to ALT0, but I don't see any other wording issues (possibly "had" could be "had had"). Your suggestion sounds quite strange to me—I don't like that use of "until". Change it to a "when" and I would be happy. — Bilorv(c)(talk)11:09, 4 August 2018 (UTC)reply
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Bilorv: The problem with "had had" can be mitigated by changing it to the "topped" suggestion. I don't mind whether we use until or when. What do you say to ALT2:
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Yoninah: I like the sound of that as well. Hopefully it does not lose the energy of the hook. I had issues with grammar before I submitted these hooks. Hope this third version work best.
MrLinkinPark333 (
talk)
23:20, 5 August 2018 (UTC)reply
A fact from Love Is Bigger Than Anything in Its Way appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 11 August 2018 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
songs on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SongsWikipedia:WikiProject SongsTemplate:WikiProject Songssong articles
I've added a "that" to ALT0, but I don't see any other wording issues (possibly "had" could be "had had"). Your suggestion sounds quite strange to me—I don't like that use of "until". Change it to a "when" and I would be happy. — Bilorv(c)(talk)11:09, 4 August 2018 (UTC)reply
@
Bilorv: The problem with "had had" can be mitigated by changing it to the "topped" suggestion. I don't mind whether we use until or when. What do you say to ALT2:
@
Yoninah: I like the sound of that as well. Hopefully it does not lose the energy of the hook. I had issues with grammar before I submitted these hooks. Hope this third version work best.
MrLinkinPark333 (
talk)
23:20, 5 August 2018 (UTC)reply