In the lead, a date is formatted to ---> "7 March 2007" and in the Development section you have, ---> "October 9, 2007". There needs to be a consistency with the dates, per
here. The article tends to have "red links", if they don't have articles, it would be best to un-link them, per
here.
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Does Reference 9 cover all this ---> "The French Museums agency will operate in collaboration with the Tourism Development and Investment Company (TDIC), which is behind the transformation of Saadiyat Island. It will be chaired by French financier and member of the country's Académie des Beaux-Arts, Marc Ladreit de Lacharriere, publisher of the periodical Revue des Deux Mondes. Bruno Maquart, the former Executive Director of Centre Pompidou, will take the position of Executive Director"? In the Locations section, is there a source for this ---> "In addition to the Louvre Abu Dhabi these will include: the Sheikh Zayed National Museum, to be designed by United Kingdom-based construction compamy Foster and Partners under the direction of Lord Noramn Foster; the Guggenheim Abu Dhabi contemporary arts museum - the world's largest Guggenheim and the only museum to be located in the Middle East; a performing arts centre designed by Zaha Hadid; a maritime museum with concept design by Tadao Ando and a number of arts pavilions"?
Reference 9 does indeed cover all of that information. As for the unreferenced info concerning new developments on Saadiyat Island, I have sourced it and provided a reference.
JordanContribs09:14, 24 September 2008 (UTC)reply
In the lead, a date is formatted to ---> "7 March 2007" and in the Development section you have, ---> "October 9, 2007". There needs to be a consistency with the dates, per
here. The article tends to have "red links", if they don't have articles, it would be best to un-link them, per
here.
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Does Reference 9 cover all this ---> "The French Museums agency will operate in collaboration with the Tourism Development and Investment Company (TDIC), which is behind the transformation of Saadiyat Island. It will be chaired by French financier and member of the country's Académie des Beaux-Arts, Marc Ladreit de Lacharriere, publisher of the periodical Revue des Deux Mondes. Bruno Maquart, the former Executive Director of Centre Pompidou, will take the position of Executive Director"? In the Locations section, is there a source for this ---> "In addition to the Louvre Abu Dhabi these will include: the Sheikh Zayed National Museum, to be designed by United Kingdom-based construction compamy Foster and Partners under the direction of Lord Noramn Foster; the Guggenheim Abu Dhabi contemporary arts museum - the world's largest Guggenheim and the only museum to be located in the Middle East; a performing arts centre designed by Zaha Hadid; a maritime museum with concept design by Tadao Ando and a number of arts pavilions"?
Reference 9 does indeed cover all of that information. As for the unreferenced info concerning new developments on Saadiyat Island, I have sourced it and provided a reference.
JordanContribs09:14, 24 September 2008 (UTC)reply