wls: Russian Revolution, Senate, Nevada, University of Nevada in Reno, University of Oregon
Early life
wl: stump speaker, Puget Sound
delink UNR
If the name of the sorority is mentioned in some ref, please name it
Greenwich Village and Cape Cod
"an established journalist" - the previous section already described him as an "established writer "
Mary Heaton Vorse - first mention should be full name, but she can be referred to as surname thereafter
Sara Bard Field - first mention should be full name, but she can be referred to by surname thereafter
"Bryant wrote to a note to..." - Bryant wrote in a note to
New York
wl: October Revolution
Death and legacy
Jan. - spell out as January
wl: Yale University
"in Sterling Memorial Library" - in the Sterling Memorial Library
See also
unnecessary as the Communist Party of the United States and Eugene O'Neill are mentioned in the article
Images
I don't think the one of Benito Mussolini is necessary, but it's only my opinion and not a suggestion
Few recommendations; well-written article. I'll put in on hold for the usual 7 days in case you're busy with other things. Please ping me when you're done. --
Rosiestep (
talk) 03:38, 12 March 2014 (UTC)reply
@
Rosiestep: I believe I've made all the changes you recommended plus a couple of others along the way. Please poke me up if you see anything else amiss.
Finetooth (
talk) 20:04, 12 March 2014 (UTC)reply
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Good job. Looks adequate for GA. --
Rosiestep (
talk) 03:02, 13 March 2014 (UTC)reply
Thank you very much for taking the time and trouble to review this article.
Finetooth (
talk) 03:22, 13 March 2014 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
wls: Russian Revolution, Senate, Nevada, University of Nevada in Reno, University of Oregon
Early life
wl: stump speaker, Puget Sound
delink UNR
If the name of the sorority is mentioned in some ref, please name it
Greenwich Village and Cape Cod
"an established journalist" - the previous section already described him as an "established writer "
Mary Heaton Vorse - first mention should be full name, but she can be referred to as surname thereafter
Sara Bard Field - first mention should be full name, but she can be referred to by surname thereafter
"Bryant wrote to a note to..." - Bryant wrote in a note to
New York
wl: October Revolution
Death and legacy
Jan. - spell out as January
wl: Yale University
"in Sterling Memorial Library" - in the Sterling Memorial Library
See also
unnecessary as the Communist Party of the United States and Eugene O'Neill are mentioned in the article
Images
I don't think the one of Benito Mussolini is necessary, but it's only my opinion and not a suggestion
Few recommendations; well-written article. I'll put in on hold for the usual 7 days in case you're busy with other things. Please ping me when you're done. --
Rosiestep (
talk) 03:38, 12 March 2014 (UTC)reply
@
Rosiestep: I believe I've made all the changes you recommended plus a couple of others along the way. Please poke me up if you see anything else amiss.
Finetooth (
talk) 20:04, 12 March 2014 (UTC)reply
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Good job. Looks adequate for GA. --
Rosiestep (
talk) 03:02, 13 March 2014 (UTC)reply
Thank you very much for taking the time and trouble to review this article.
Finetooth (
talk) 03:22, 13 March 2014 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.