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Currently, there are only three sentences that make up Villermé's biography. I would like to expand on this information as well as the information regarding his works (specifically On Prisons As They Are and As They Should Be). As of now, I have about 3 sound sources to help compile a more complete biography. Any suggestions for sources, topics to make sure to cover, or general information that should be included would be of extreme help as this talk page does not yet have very many, if any, current discussions. -- Faithkbrown ( talk) 19:15, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
>> Tableau de l'état physique et moral des ouvriers employés dans les manufactures de coton, de laine et de soie >> Why is it necessary to write 2 different paragraphs on the same subject (Tableau / Study) ?
I really enjoyed reading your article. You contributed quite substantially and your organization is clear and concise. I believe that adding more about Villerme's political affiliations and how this impacted his views on public health would be very effective in that it would allow the reader to understand his background a bit better. You covered it slightly at the end, although it would be great to expand on it. Perhaps you can draw on what we discussed in lecture?
Thanks!
Scarycheerio123 ( talk) 03:05, 27 March 2017 (UTC)Scarycheerio123
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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth ( talk · contribs) 06:15, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
I propose to take on this review. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 06:15, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
This article is in general well written, well referenced and reasonably comprehensive. It meets most of the GA criteria and I have listed a few points below. It seems to be part of a student project and the nominator has not edited since 2 May and may have moved on to other things. It should be possible to bring this article to GA standard even if the nominator is unresponsive.
![]() | Louis-René Villermé has been listed as one of the
Natural sciences good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: July 9, 2017. ( Reviewed version). |
![]() | A fact from Louis-René Villermé appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 2 April 2017 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||||||||
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available
on the course page. Student editor(s):
Faithkbrown. Peer reviewers:
Aeisenstadt1.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 02:53, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Currently, there are only three sentences that make up Villermé's biography. I would like to expand on this information as well as the information regarding his works (specifically On Prisons As They Are and As They Should Be). As of now, I have about 3 sound sources to help compile a more complete biography. Any suggestions for sources, topics to make sure to cover, or general information that should be included would be of extreme help as this talk page does not yet have very many, if any, current discussions. -- Faithkbrown ( talk) 19:15, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
>> Tableau de l'état physique et moral des ouvriers employés dans les manufactures de coton, de laine et de soie >> Why is it necessary to write 2 different paragraphs on the same subject (Tableau / Study) ?
I really enjoyed reading your article. You contributed quite substantially and your organization is clear and concise. I believe that adding more about Villerme's political affiliations and how this impacted his views on public health would be very effective in that it would allow the reader to understand his background a bit better. You covered it slightly at the end, although it would be great to expand on it. Perhaps you can draw on what we discussed in lecture?
Thanks!
Scarycheerio123 ( talk) 03:05, 27 March 2017 (UTC)Scarycheerio123
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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth ( talk · contribs) 06:15, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
I propose to take on this review. Cwmhiraeth ( talk) 06:15, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
This article is in general well written, well referenced and reasonably comprehensive. It meets most of the GA criteria and I have listed a few points below. It seems to be part of a student project and the nominator has not edited since 2 May and may have moved on to other things. It should be possible to bring this article to GA standard even if the nominator is unresponsive.