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from music critics: the singers' vocal performance was praised, but Miguel's guest appearance was criticized → from
music critics, who praised the singers' vocal performance but criticized Miguel's guest appearance
"It was later included as the second track on the album, released 2 June 2017" Remove this sentence since you have already mentioned that the song was released as a single from the album
Merge this section with "Commercial performance" and re-title to "Reception"
mixed reviews from critics → mixed reviews from
music critics
Craighead labelled it a "pop banger," → Craighead of The Fader labelled the song as a "pop banger,"
and praised the chorus as "catchy." → and praised its chorus as "catchy."
"Rap-Up praised the song" → "Rap-Up commended the track" to avoid repetition
called the song "starry", and Wass praised the production and vocals → called the song "starry", with the latter complimenting the production and vocals
Miguel's guest appearance, writing he "he gives it → Miguel's guest appearance, writing "he gives it
as well as praising its "sensual side", different from Lipa's previous releases. → and likened its "sensual side" for being different from Lipa's previous releases
Bianca Gracie of
Fuse praised the singers' "smooth-as-velvet" vocals → Bianca Gracie of
Fuse appreciated the singers' "smooth-as-velvet" vocals
After this sentence of Fuse, merge the next paragraph with this paragraph
For Rolling Stone, Ryan Reed labelled the song "seductive" and Miguel's appearance "passionate." → Ryan Reed from Rolling Stone regarded the song as "seductive" and Miguel's appearance as "passionate."
list, with its description being that it is "a starlit rollerskating → list, with the publication writing that it is "a starlit rollerskating
Done
Commercial performance
This section should start as the second paragraph of "Reception"
The song departed the chart the following week, lasting two non-consecutive weeks, re-entering at number 98 after the release of its parent album on the chart dated 9 June 2017. → The song departed the chart the following week, re-entering at number 98 after the release of its parent album on the issue dated 9 June 2017, lasting two non-consecutive weeks
For ref 18, use iTunes refs instead for a few countries. You can refer to
Black Swan page. You can do it for 3-4 countries. Wikilink on
iTunes Store should be on the first mention
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from music critics: the singers' vocal performance was praised, but Miguel's guest appearance was criticized → from
music critics, who praised the singers' vocal performance but criticized Miguel's guest appearance
"It was later included as the second track on the album, released 2 June 2017" Remove this sentence since you have already mentioned that the song was released as a single from the album
Merge this section with "Commercial performance" and re-title to "Reception"
mixed reviews from critics → mixed reviews from
music critics
Craighead labelled it a "pop banger," → Craighead of The Fader labelled the song as a "pop banger,"
and praised the chorus as "catchy." → and praised its chorus as "catchy."
"Rap-Up praised the song" → "Rap-Up commended the track" to avoid repetition
called the song "starry", and Wass praised the production and vocals → called the song "starry", with the latter complimenting the production and vocals
Miguel's guest appearance, writing he "he gives it → Miguel's guest appearance, writing "he gives it
as well as praising its "sensual side", different from Lipa's previous releases. → and likened its "sensual side" for being different from Lipa's previous releases
Bianca Gracie of
Fuse praised the singers' "smooth-as-velvet" vocals → Bianca Gracie of
Fuse appreciated the singers' "smooth-as-velvet" vocals
After this sentence of Fuse, merge the next paragraph with this paragraph
For Rolling Stone, Ryan Reed labelled the song "seductive" and Miguel's appearance "passionate." → Ryan Reed from Rolling Stone regarded the song as "seductive" and Miguel's appearance as "passionate."
list, with its description being that it is "a starlit rollerskating → list, with the publication writing that it is "a starlit rollerskating
Done
Commercial performance
This section should start as the second paragraph of "Reception"
The song departed the chart the following week, lasting two non-consecutive weeks, re-entering at number 98 after the release of its parent album on the chart dated 9 June 2017. → The song departed the chart the following week, re-entering at number 98 after the release of its parent album on the issue dated 9 June 2017, lasting two non-consecutive weeks
For ref 18, use iTunes refs instead for a few countries. You can refer to
Black Swan page. You can do it for 3-4 countries. Wikilink on
iTunes Store should be on the first mention
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.