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Reviewer: Delldot ( talk · contribs) 06:17, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
This is an interesting guy, I'm glad this review gave me the opportunity to find out about him. Unfortunately I'm going to fail the article. My main concern is the organization, I'll go into more detail below.
Thanks for the work on the article so far, it was a pleasure to read. Let me know if I can be of any help in improving this article or others, or if I can offer any explanation or clarification. delldot ∇. 06:17, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
Hello! This is a note to let the editors of this article know that File:Loren Pankratz 2011.jpg will be appearing as picture of the day on February 27, 2015. You can view and edit the POTD blurb at Template:POTD/2015-02-27. If this article needs any attention or maintenance, it would be preferable if that could be done before its appearance on the Main Page. Thanks! — Crisco 1492 ( talk) 01:52, 9 February 2015 (UTC)
I see the article failed GA several years ago for issues still present in the article. The article [1] was replete with uncited text, text cited to self, text not verified by sources, unattributed opinions and puffery. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 06:54, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
His wife, Ethelyn, was the administrator of the Providence Center for Medically Fragile Children; [1] [2] they have four children.
In 1970, Pankratz signed an organ donor card that is now held in the historical archives of the OHSU library. citation needed
his work pioneered attention to what is now recognized as a serious health problem. His article was the first to define "drug seeking behavior" and recommend management strategies. citation needed This kind of claim can't be sourced to his paper-- needs a secondary, independent source.
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Reviewer: Delldot ( talk · contribs) 06:17, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
This is an interesting guy, I'm glad this review gave me the opportunity to find out about him. Unfortunately I'm going to fail the article. My main concern is the organization, I'll go into more detail below.
Thanks for the work on the article so far, it was a pleasure to read. Let me know if I can be of any help in improving this article or others, or if I can offer any explanation or clarification. delldot ∇. 06:17, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
Hello! This is a note to let the editors of this article know that File:Loren Pankratz 2011.jpg will be appearing as picture of the day on February 27, 2015. You can view and edit the POTD blurb at Template:POTD/2015-02-27. If this article needs any attention or maintenance, it would be preferable if that could be done before its appearance on the Main Page. Thanks! — Crisco 1492 ( talk) 01:52, 9 February 2015 (UTC)
I see the article failed GA several years ago for issues still present in the article. The article [1] was replete with uncited text, text cited to self, text not verified by sources, unattributed opinions and puffery. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 06:54, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
His wife, Ethelyn, was the administrator of the Providence Center for Medically Fragile Children; [1] [2] they have four children.
In 1970, Pankratz signed an organ donor card that is now held in the historical archives of the OHSU library. citation needed
his work pioneered attention to what is now recognized as a serious health problem. His article was the first to define "drug seeking behavior" and recommend management strategies. citation needed This kind of claim can't be sourced to his paper-- needs a secondary, independent source.
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