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I have a couple of concerns with the prose that make the article a little difficult to read. Notably, the last two paragraphs of the Construction section are quite choppy and full of short sentences, making them difficult to read. They should be reworded to increase sentence fluency. Also reading awkwardly: "All three men shot Corleone and flew back via car...", what's meant by they flew back via car? Is "fled" the word we're looking for here? One more note: the first paragraph of the tolls section indicate that the two parkways initially had tolls set at 25 cents, but the second paragraph then says that in 1975 the tolls were raised from 10 cents to 25 cents. As it reads, this currently makes no sense.
I'm going to put this on hold, pending some slight revision. The sentence fluency issues I wouldn't call a dealbreaker for GA status, but the other two issues are confusing and currently keep this article from meeting criterion 1a. The hold time should allow for these issues to be fixed, at which time I'll pass the article once the issues are repaired.
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This article is within the scope of the U.S. Roads WikiProject, an attempt to build a comprehensive and detailed guide to
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roads in the
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I have a couple of concerns with the prose that make the article a little difficult to read. Notably, the last two paragraphs of the Construction section are quite choppy and full of short sentences, making them difficult to read. They should be reworded to increase sentence fluency. Also reading awkwardly: "All three men shot Corleone and flew back via car...", what's meant by they flew back via car? Is "fled" the word we're looking for here? One more note: the first paragraph of the tolls section indicate that the two parkways initially had tolls set at 25 cents, but the second paragraph then says that in 1975 the tolls were raised from 10 cents to 25 cents. As it reads, this currently makes no sense.
I'm going to put this on hold, pending some slight revision. The sentence fluency issues I wouldn't call a dealbreaker for GA status, but the other two issues are confusing and currently keep this article from meeting criterion 1a. The hold time should allow for these issues to be fixed, at which time I'll pass the article once the issues are repaired.