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Reviewer: Fiamh ( talk · contribs) 02:36, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
Houston was ill with the tuberculosis that would end his life a decade later. He resigned from the NAACP to return to private practice; Thurgood Marshall took over for him. In the first five years after the war, the NAACP found more plaintiffs and challenged segregationist policies in public graduate schools with cases such asYou can cite the cases for their existence, but this needs a secondary source.
And as for the ISBN, sometimes it refers to the online version, not the print one. Daniel Case ( talk) 03:19, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
($4,000 in modern dollars)These are helpful, but please state the year, i.e. 2019. Helps the article not go out of date.
The NAACP attorneys were encouragedAgain, you're going to need a source for this. The court case isn't going to support this info.
someone else.[6] ... might have been.[6]combine refs for readability.
After working as a clerk for the Works Progress Administration...what is your source for this paragraph?
Houston and Redmond successfully petitionedand
Gaines had begun his lettersuggest combining each of these paragraphs with the next paragraph per WP:PARAGRAPH.
In his last letter to his mother, dated March 3what is the source for this?
By that time Gaines had received honors (some were posthumous)This sentence just sounds really awkward.
Not related to GA criteria:
I shall avail myself of this, although I think I could find a copy in the two excellent university libraries I have access to. It would help the article a lot. Daniel Case ( talk) 03:35, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
Two media outlets looked into the case, a half-century apartneeds to be cited inline if you plan to take this to DYK or FAC.
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Reviewer: Fiamh ( talk · contribs) 02:36, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
Houston was ill with the tuberculosis that would end his life a decade later. He resigned from the NAACP to return to private practice; Thurgood Marshall took over for him. In the first five years after the war, the NAACP found more plaintiffs and challenged segregationist policies in public graduate schools with cases such asYou can cite the cases for their existence, but this needs a secondary source.
And as for the ISBN, sometimes it refers to the online version, not the print one. Daniel Case ( talk) 03:19, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
($4,000 in modern dollars)These are helpful, but please state the year, i.e. 2019. Helps the article not go out of date.
The NAACP attorneys were encouragedAgain, you're going to need a source for this. The court case isn't going to support this info.
someone else.[6] ... might have been.[6]combine refs for readability.
After working as a clerk for the Works Progress Administration...what is your source for this paragraph?
Houston and Redmond successfully petitionedand
Gaines had begun his lettersuggest combining each of these paragraphs with the next paragraph per WP:PARAGRAPH.
In his last letter to his mother, dated March 3what is the source for this?
By that time Gaines had received honors (some were posthumous)This sentence just sounds really awkward.
Not related to GA criteria:
I shall avail myself of this, although I think I could find a copy in the two excellent university libraries I have access to. It would help the article a lot. Daniel Case ( talk) 03:35, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
Two media outlets looked into the case, a half-century apartneeds to be cited inline if you plan to take this to DYK or FAC.