The release sentence should be swapped with the recording one in the order
"It was recorded at an acoustic live show with her brother" → "The album was recorded during an
acoustic live show with Eilish's brother" with the target
Remove wikilink on Third Man Records
"It was officially released as Eilish's first live album on" → "It was released by Third Man Records on"
"The record received a major drop on" → "Live at Third Man Records experienced a major release on"
"debuting at number 55 on the" → "debuting at number 55 on the US"
"selling 13 thousand copies in that week." → "selling 13,000 copies during that week."
Sure you can't add another sentence to the second para since it is too short?
Eric Alper should only be wikilinked on the author of ref 12 per WP:OVERLINK
Cite
YouTube as the publisher instead for ref 13 with the wikilink
WP:OVERLINK of Rolling Stone on ref 14
Final comments and verdict
On hold but the track listing needs to be sourced more than anything else, or else I am not sure if this may be able to become a GA, sadly. Good luck though, I am glad to have been part of your ever-growing experience! --
K. Peake20:36, 24 October 2020 (UTC)reply
Kyle Peake, you can go ahead and fail the GA nomination. I am having some issues right now with some editors and I think they might complain about this becoming GA. Thanks a lot for all the reviews you have done for me. You are truly the best editor on this website.
The Ultimate Boss (
talk)
22:34, 30 October 2020 (UTC)reply
The release sentence should be swapped with the recording one in the order
"It was recorded at an acoustic live show with her brother" → "The album was recorded during an
acoustic live show with Eilish's brother" with the target
Remove wikilink on Third Man Records
"It was officially released as Eilish's first live album on" → "It was released by Third Man Records on"
"The record received a major drop on" → "Live at Third Man Records experienced a major release on"
"debuting at number 55 on the" → "debuting at number 55 on the US"
"selling 13 thousand copies in that week." → "selling 13,000 copies during that week."
Sure you can't add another sentence to the second para since it is too short?
Eric Alper should only be wikilinked on the author of ref 12 per WP:OVERLINK
Cite
YouTube as the publisher instead for ref 13 with the wikilink
WP:OVERLINK of Rolling Stone on ref 14
Final comments and verdict
On hold but the track listing needs to be sourced more than anything else, or else I am not sure if this may be able to become a GA, sadly. Good luck though, I am glad to have been part of your ever-growing experience! --
K. Peake20:36, 24 October 2020 (UTC)reply
Kyle Peake, you can go ahead and fail the GA nomination. I am having some issues right now with some editors and I think they might complain about this becoming GA. Thanks a lot for all the reviews you have done for me. You are truly the best editor on this website.
The Ultimate Boss (
talk)
22:34, 30 October 2020 (UTC)reply