LiveLoveA$AP is the debut mixtape by American rapper A$AP Rocky... → Have the sentence end here to comply with
WP:BEGINNING
Allmusic editor Andre Barnes dubs LiveLoveA$AP "the antithesis of conscious rap" and a "guilty pleasure" for hip hop purists.[1] → Put general attitude of reviewers toward the album, not just one
Background
In August, Rocky followed with "Peso"... → Specify year
Composition
No issues
Release and promotion
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Reception
No issues
Track listing
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Personnel
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Release history
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References
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After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. There are some minor issues that are keeping the article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
Rp0211(talk2me)18:30, 22 June 2012 (UTC)reply
RE:
All album articles on Wikipedia, particularly the ones passed through GA/FA, have the first sentence as is, with the release date and label at the end. Although there's nothing about external consistency among articles in any guidelines, I don't see what WP:Beginning says that it should be otherwise, and since it's a release, it kind of suits that subject of the article.
According to
WP:BEGINNING, "If possible, the page title should be the subject of the first sentence." Therefore, in this instance, it should say what number of album it is and who it is written by.
Rp0211(talk2me)20:05, 22 June 2012 (UTC)reply
LiveLoveA$AP is the debut mixtape by American rapper A$AP Rocky... → Have the sentence end here to comply with
WP:BEGINNING
Allmusic editor Andre Barnes dubs LiveLoveA$AP "the antithesis of conscious rap" and a "guilty pleasure" for hip hop purists.[1] → Put general attitude of reviewers toward the album, not just one
Background
In August, Rocky followed with "Peso"... → Specify year
Composition
No issues
Release and promotion
No issues
Reception
No issues
Track listing
No issues
Personnel
No issues
Release history
Make sure to include sources to verify all of this information
References
Put the references into two separate columns to make it more organized
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. There are some minor issues that are keeping the article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
Rp0211(talk2me)18:30, 22 June 2012 (UTC)reply
RE:
All album articles on Wikipedia, particularly the ones passed through GA/FA, have the first sentence as is, with the release date and label at the end. Although there's nothing about external consistency among articles in any guidelines, I don't see what WP:Beginning says that it should be otherwise, and since it's a release, it kind of suits that subject of the article.
According to
WP:BEGINNING, "If possible, the page title should be the subject of the first sentence." Therefore, in this instance, it should say what number of album it is and who it is written by.
Rp0211(talk2me)20:05, 22 June 2012 (UTC)reply