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Reviewer: Dylan620 ( talk · contribs) 21:24, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Six months is a really unfortunate wait for a review... I'll tackle this sometime within the next few days. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 21:24, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
The American experimental artist Justin. Nullsleep's genre is not mentioned in that paragraph, so excising that particular Lincoln clause would make the passage more consistent, while also removing the second mention of Lincoln's first name.
Chelsea-based– should be clarified, whether in prose or by piping a link, that this is Chelsea, Manhattan. The source refers to a venue called Spectrum in a Chelsea, New York; while the disambiguation page for Chelsea lists multiple municipalities with that name in New York, a Google Search for "spectrum chelsea ny" turns up a Manhattan address.
Schminnte and Chonk – this article nearly meets the criteria, but the above points must be addressed before I can comfortably promote it. Other than that, Schminnte, I'm quite impressed. This was an enjoyable read; the prose is engaging, the article is structured in a way that is easy to navigate, and there are no issues I could detect WRT copyright. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 23:12, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Dylan620 ( talk · contribs) 21:24, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Six months is a really unfortunate wait for a review... I'll tackle this sometime within the next few days. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 21:24, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
The American experimental artist Justin. Nullsleep's genre is not mentioned in that paragraph, so excising that particular Lincoln clause would make the passage more consistent, while also removing the second mention of Lincoln's first name.
Chelsea-based– should be clarified, whether in prose or by piping a link, that this is Chelsea, Manhattan. The source refers to a venue called Spectrum in a Chelsea, New York; while the disambiguation page for Chelsea lists multiple municipalities with that name in New York, a Google Search for "spectrum chelsea ny" turns up a Manhattan address.
Schminnte and Chonk – this article nearly meets the criteria, but the above points must be addressed before I can comfortably promote it. Other than that, Schminnte, I'm quite impressed. This was an enjoyable read; the prose is engaging, the article is structured in a way that is easy to navigate, and there are no issues I could detect WRT copyright. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 23:12, 1 March 2024 (UTC)