Add after the above sentence one about the song's critical reviews
As with "
Sad Machine" I prefer adding sentences regarding reviews only when sources explicitly comment on it. In the case of "Sad Machine", critics generally agreed on its atmospheric feeling, but here I don't think there's an easy way to summarize the reviews, otherwise it would get too extensive. However I added another sentence saying that critics noted that "it was the first on Worlds with a faster tempo". Skyshiftertalk21:19, 20 June 2024 (UTC)reply
"a music video was" → "an accompanying
music video was" with the wikilink, add info about the synopsis too
Done
Mention which charts it entered
I think that's too much info considering the length of the article; it would be almost the same as the last paragraph of "Release and reception".
Background and composition
Add info about the synths to the audio sample too
I don't see that info in the article, but I added that "Multiple critics found it influenced by
Passion Pit".
Add the release year of Space Invaders in brackets
Skyshifter I have done some copy editing for you now, although you still need to add various sources to back up the Apple Music releases being in various locations; try about three or four regions please. --
K. Peake09:09, 21 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Add after the above sentence one about the song's critical reviews
As with "
Sad Machine" I prefer adding sentences regarding reviews only when sources explicitly comment on it. In the case of "Sad Machine", critics generally agreed on its atmospheric feeling, but here I don't think there's an easy way to summarize the reviews, otherwise it would get too extensive. However I added another sentence saying that critics noted that "it was the first on Worlds with a faster tempo". Skyshiftertalk21:19, 20 June 2024 (UTC)reply
"a music video was" → "an accompanying
music video was" with the wikilink, add info about the synopsis too
Done
Mention which charts it entered
I think that's too much info considering the length of the article; it would be almost the same as the last paragraph of "Release and reception".
Background and composition
Add info about the synths to the audio sample too
I don't see that info in the article, but I added that "Multiple critics found it influenced by
Passion Pit".
Add the release year of Space Invaders in brackets
Skyshifter I have done some copy editing for you now, although you still need to add various sources to back up the Apple Music releases being in various locations; try about three or four regions please. --
K. Peake09:09, 21 June 2024 (UTC)reply