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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 04:06, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
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Just some copy fixes to complete and this is ready to go. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:26, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.
Children taking part in television programmes must be protected from emotional distress and scenes of violence, Ofcom has warned broadcasters, following a “serious lapse” by the BBC in its duty of care to a 13 year-old actor. The watchdog has summoned broadcasters to an industry-wide meeting where they will be reminded about their duties to protect the emotional welfare of children.That actually might be worth adding that Ofcom summoned an industry meeting over this issue!
It was a good set up, with personal and professional clashes nicely marshalled...
There are two images: NFUR poster art and an image from Gage Skidmore. Encouragement: Add alt text.
@ Sammi Brie: Everything should be addressed. I think there was initially a name there for Laverty's accountant but I removed it when shortening the summaries because it was non-essential to the overall plot. I likely missed the comma when I did that. I'm honestly not sure if stake[s]-out is usually hyphanated in British English. I'm American, so it was a bit of a task to write portions of this. With English in general I found cases both where it is hyphanated ( [1], [2]) and where it isn't ( [3], [4]). None of these specify a specific country variation. Some also write it as stake[s] out (two words), while others write it as stake[s]out (one word). If you think it should be written a certain way, let me know and I can change it. Thank you for the review! TheDoctorWho (talk) 05:20, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
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Just some copy fixes to complete and this is ready to go. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:26, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.
Children taking part in television programmes must be protected from emotional distress and scenes of violence, Ofcom has warned broadcasters, following a “serious lapse” by the BBC in its duty of care to a 13 year-old actor. The watchdog has summoned broadcasters to an industry-wide meeting where they will be reminded about their duties to protect the emotional welfare of children.That actually might be worth adding that Ofcom summoned an industry meeting over this issue!
It was a good set up, with personal and professional clashes nicely marshalled...
There are two images: NFUR poster art and an image from Gage Skidmore. Encouragement: Add alt text.
@ Sammi Brie: Everything should be addressed. I think there was initially a name there for Laverty's accountant but I removed it when shortening the summaries because it was non-essential to the overall plot. I likely missed the comma when I did that. I'm honestly not sure if stake[s]-out is usually hyphanated in British English. I'm American, so it was a bit of a task to write portions of this. With English in general I found cases both where it is hyphanated ( [1], [2]) and where it isn't ( [3], [4]). None of these specify a specific country variation. Some also write it as stake[s] out (two words), while others write it as stake[s]out (one word). If you think it should be written a certain way, let me know and I can change it. Thank you for the review! TheDoctorWho (talk) 05:20, 18 March 2024 (UTC)