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Reviewer: Etriusus ( talk · contribs) 17:52, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
Alright, lets get this reviewed. Just a cursory glance has me worried about the completeness of the article. 6k bytes might be pushing some limits. There is nothing that inherently disqualifies shorter pages, but the smallest GA I've even seen is
[1]. A glance at the sources tell me there is more information that could be added. I'll give it a full review just for posterity's sake but do not foresee it passing.
Lindley Hall Farm is a farm located near the villages of Fenny Drayton and Higham on the Hill in Leicestershire, England.
Five years after the owner of the Lindley Hall estate, Lieutenant Commander Francis Eyre RN, died, Lindley Hall was ultimately demolished, being one of the country houses and estates in the Nuneaton area to fall victim to redevelopment.This sentence needs to be retooled
Despite this, the name of Lindley Hall Farm would live on and would remain a remnant of the past.Source missing
I can see you're a new editor. This page would quick-fail under normal circumstances but I've found myself at a crossroads with no pending project at the moment. If you would prefer to have me fail the page and then help you here with your first GA nom, I'm more than happy to do that. Be forewarned that, if I help you work on the page, I am disqualified from doing a GA review for this page and cannot help in any significant way as long as I am the reviewer. There are a number of issues with this article and I would rather help you figure this out than just wash may hands of the matter. It's up to you. If you think you can manage to fix these issues within 7 days, then I'll give you an opportunity. Etrius ( Us) 17:52, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
Having been in ownership of the Farmer family,When did it come into the Farmer's ownership?
In October 2002, using global satellite positioning,[3] the Ordnance Survey initiated a study to find the geographical centre of England, challenging previous myths that the geographical centre of England was located in places such as Meriden in the West Midlands, approximately 11 kilometres to the south of Lindley Hall Farm, which had traditionally claimed to be the geographical centre of England, having a 500-year-old monument claiming the title.one massive run on sentence
for the proposed geographical central point of Englandrepetitive, just say 'the farm'
However, the current owner of the farm, Stephen Farmer, wishes for the farm to be turned into a tourist attraction,[6] as well as Steve Wegerif, chairman of Hinckley and Bosworth Tourism Partnership, saying that it "seems only right" that the centre of England is located in the farm[5] and that it was "fantastic for the centre to be officially recognised and have it marked in the county."[6]another run on sentence
several places are continuing to claim this status.reword
by manywho? this is a WP:WEASEL
however, it is not known where the basis for this claim came fromstatement not supported by the source
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![]() | Lindley Hall Farm was nominated as a Geography and places good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (November 25, 2022, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Reviewer: Etriusus ( talk · contribs) 17:52, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
Alright, lets get this reviewed. Just a cursory glance has me worried about the completeness of the article. 6k bytes might be pushing some limits. There is nothing that inherently disqualifies shorter pages, but the smallest GA I've even seen is
[1]. A glance at the sources tell me there is more information that could be added. I'll give it a full review just for posterity's sake but do not foresee it passing.
Lindley Hall Farm is a farm located near the villages of Fenny Drayton and Higham on the Hill in Leicestershire, England.
Five years after the owner of the Lindley Hall estate, Lieutenant Commander Francis Eyre RN, died, Lindley Hall was ultimately demolished, being one of the country houses and estates in the Nuneaton area to fall victim to redevelopment.This sentence needs to be retooled
Despite this, the name of Lindley Hall Farm would live on and would remain a remnant of the past.Source missing
I can see you're a new editor. This page would quick-fail under normal circumstances but I've found myself at a crossroads with no pending project at the moment. If you would prefer to have me fail the page and then help you here with your first GA nom, I'm more than happy to do that. Be forewarned that, if I help you work on the page, I am disqualified from doing a GA review for this page and cannot help in any significant way as long as I am the reviewer. There are a number of issues with this article and I would rather help you figure this out than just wash may hands of the matter. It's up to you. If you think you can manage to fix these issues within 7 days, then I'll give you an opportunity. Etrius ( Us) 17:52, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
Having been in ownership of the Farmer family,When did it come into the Farmer's ownership?
In October 2002, using global satellite positioning,[3] the Ordnance Survey initiated a study to find the geographical centre of England, challenging previous myths that the geographical centre of England was located in places such as Meriden in the West Midlands, approximately 11 kilometres to the south of Lindley Hall Farm, which had traditionally claimed to be the geographical centre of England, having a 500-year-old monument claiming the title.one massive run on sentence
for the proposed geographical central point of Englandrepetitive, just say 'the farm'
However, the current owner of the farm, Stephen Farmer, wishes for the farm to be turned into a tourist attraction,[6] as well as Steve Wegerif, chairman of Hinckley and Bosworth Tourism Partnership, saying that it "seems only right" that the centre of England is located in the farm[5] and that it was "fantastic for the centre to be officially recognised and have it marked in the county."[6]another run on sentence
several places are continuing to claim this status.reword
by manywho? this is a WP:WEASEL
however, it is not known where the basis for this claim came fromstatement not supported by the source
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