The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
"crossed one million copies" → "crossed 1,000,000 copies"
Done
The claim that this was the first time a foreign artist achieved a million shipments is false, since it is the first time Dion 24 years ago; reword accordingly
Done changed "foreign" to "Korean"
"maintained its number one spot" → "remained at number one on"
Done
Are you sure they are "copies" or "physical copies"? Don't change if the latter is indeed correct...
Done Yes, kept it as it is
Remove target on Oricon Weekly Singles Chart
Done
"on the chart issue dated" → "for the chart issue dated"
Done
[19] should solely be at the end of the sentence before [20][21]
Done
"At year end," → "For the year end chart,"
Done
"the
Japan Hot 100- a chart operated by Billboard magazine- on" → "the BillboardJapan Hot 100 for the chart issue date of"
Done
Mention how many places it rose by maybe?
Done mentioned that
"of July 22," → "of July 22, 2019."
Done
"before dropping to number 16..." remove this and [26] since it is violating
WP:CHARTS
""
A Thousand Winds". It was the band's first million certification" → ""
A Thousand Winds"; it was the first time the band attained the certification"
Done
Keep the target the same but rename the chart to US World Digital Songs
Done
Wikilink should be on the
record chart part of the words instead, but don't change the actual prose
Citations regarding the digital release of "Lights / Boy with Luv" by BTS in various countries → Citations regarding the digital release of "Lights / Boy with Luv" by BTS in various countries: on ref 9, plus some of the citations for foreign languages are not titled appropriately so fix that
Done but couldn't find anything wrong with the foreign language titles
Take the Japanese citation being titled "Lights / Boy with Luv – Single by BTS" for example, since it is actually
titled elsewise; there are others to fix too --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
05:31, 17 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Kyle Peake, I have left a few comments above and have addressed the rest per your suggestion. Let me know if anything else needs to be added / fixed. Thank you so much for reviewing this. --
Ashleyyoursmile!17:48, 15 July 2020 (UTC)reply
DEEPPINK I did some copyediting but some issues still need fixing, which instructions will be provided for above. Also, only the refs should be centered in the release history table, plus are you sure hlist can't be replaced with bullet points under Track listings? --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
05:31, 17 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Kyle Peake, I have left a few comments above and have addressed the rest per your suggestion. Let me know if anything else needs to be added / fixed. Thank you so much for reviewing this. --
Ashleyyoursmile!17:48, 15 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Ashleyyoursmile I did some copyediting but some issues still need fixing, which instructions will be provided for above. Also, only the refs should be centered in the release history table, plus are you sure hlist can't be replaced with bullet points under Track listings? --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
05:31, 17 July 2020 (UTC)reply
@
Ashleyyoursmile: No it is fine, you can keep as not bullet point since that isn't an infobox; I have fixed the titles and listed instructions in my revision for future reference. ✓Pass now, congrats on the quick and professional response! --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
09:12, 17 July 2020 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
"crossed one million copies" → "crossed 1,000,000 copies"
Done
The claim that this was the first time a foreign artist achieved a million shipments is false, since it is the first time Dion 24 years ago; reword accordingly
Done changed "foreign" to "Korean"
"maintained its number one spot" → "remained at number one on"
Done
Are you sure they are "copies" or "physical copies"? Don't change if the latter is indeed correct...
Done Yes, kept it as it is
Remove target on Oricon Weekly Singles Chart
Done
"on the chart issue dated" → "for the chart issue dated"
Done
[19] should solely be at the end of the sentence before [20][21]
Done
"At year end," → "For the year end chart,"
Done
"the
Japan Hot 100- a chart operated by Billboard magazine- on" → "the BillboardJapan Hot 100 for the chart issue date of"
Done
Mention how many places it rose by maybe?
Done mentioned that
"of July 22," → "of July 22, 2019."
Done
"before dropping to number 16..." remove this and [26] since it is violating
WP:CHARTS
""
A Thousand Winds". It was the band's first million certification" → ""
A Thousand Winds"; it was the first time the band attained the certification"
Done
Keep the target the same but rename the chart to US World Digital Songs
Done
Wikilink should be on the
record chart part of the words instead, but don't change the actual prose
Citations regarding the digital release of "Lights / Boy with Luv" by BTS in various countries → Citations regarding the digital release of "Lights / Boy with Luv" by BTS in various countries: on ref 9, plus some of the citations for foreign languages are not titled appropriately so fix that
Done but couldn't find anything wrong with the foreign language titles
Take the Japanese citation being titled "Lights / Boy with Luv – Single by BTS" for example, since it is actually
titled elsewise; there are others to fix too --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
05:31, 17 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Kyle Peake, I have left a few comments above and have addressed the rest per your suggestion. Let me know if anything else needs to be added / fixed. Thank you so much for reviewing this. --
Ashleyyoursmile!17:48, 15 July 2020 (UTC)reply
DEEPPINK I did some copyediting but some issues still need fixing, which instructions will be provided for above. Also, only the refs should be centered in the release history table, plus are you sure hlist can't be replaced with bullet points under Track listings? --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
05:31, 17 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Kyle Peake, I have left a few comments above and have addressed the rest per your suggestion. Let me know if anything else needs to be added / fixed. Thank you so much for reviewing this. --
Ashleyyoursmile!17:48, 15 July 2020 (UTC)reply
Ashleyyoursmile I did some copyediting but some issues still need fixing, which instructions will be provided for above. Also, only the refs should be centered in the release history table, plus are you sure hlist can't be replaced with bullet points under Track listings? --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
05:31, 17 July 2020 (UTC)reply
@
Ashleyyoursmile: No it is fine, you can keep as not bullet point since that isn't an infobox; I have fixed the titles and listed instructions in my revision for future reference. ✓Pass now, congrats on the quick and professional response! --
Kyle Peake (
talk)
09:12, 17 July 2020 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.