1111tomica, please withdraw so that others can have the opportunity to review. If no one has done so by the time you're ready to start the review, you certainly can have it back. Two Hearted River(
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fish)23:46, 14 March 2012 (UTC)reply
Cyrus explained that lyrical inspiration for the song was from female empowerment. ---> Cyrus explained that the theme of female empowerment was a lyrical inspiration for the song. — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Done
Musically, "Liberty Walk" is an uptempo dance-pop song which consists of rapped verses by the singer. ---> Musically, "Liberty Walk" is an uptempo dance-pop song which also contains rapped verses. — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
"Liberty Walk" peaked at number three on the U.S. Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles Billboard component chart ---> "Liberty Walk" peaked at number three on the U.S. Billboard Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles chart (sometimes it reads better when is simple ;)) — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Cyrus explained the female empowerment behind the lyrical interpretation of "Liberty Walk", saying: ---> Cyrus explained the lyrical inspiration of the song which is about female empowerment, while concluding: — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Heather Phares of Allmusic noted the song's use... She also noted... It's getting to repetitive. Plus I think you have a grammar mistake in the first sentence. — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
1111tomica, please withdraw so that others can have the opportunity to review. If no one has done so by the time you're ready to start the review, you certainly can have it back. Two Hearted River(
paddle /
fish)23:46, 14 March 2012 (UTC)reply
Cyrus explained that lyrical inspiration for the song was from female empowerment. ---> Cyrus explained that the theme of female empowerment was a lyrical inspiration for the song. — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Done
Musically, "Liberty Walk" is an uptempo dance-pop song which consists of rapped verses by the singer. ---> Musically, "Liberty Walk" is an uptempo dance-pop song which also contains rapped verses. — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
"Liberty Walk" peaked at number three on the U.S. Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles Billboard component chart ---> "Liberty Walk" peaked at number three on the U.S. Billboard Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles chart (sometimes it reads better when is simple ;)) — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Cyrus explained the female empowerment behind the lyrical interpretation of "Liberty Walk", saying: ---> Cyrus explained the lyrical inspiration of the song which is about female empowerment, while concluding: — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Heather Phares of Allmusic noted the song's use... She also noted... It's getting to repetitive. Plus I think you have a grammar mistake in the first sentence. — Tomica(talk)16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply