I can't see the source, so I'm asking is it correct to state BBC sessions here when only one is specified or does the source say there was multiple ones?
"cut of the film but was" → "cut of the film, but was"
"a more
folk-inspired version of the track with" → "a more
folk-inspired number with" to be less wordy
"called it superior to Bowie's entire debut album and acknowledged its sound" → "called the song superior to Bowie's entire debut album and acknowledged the sound"
I can't see the source, so I'm asking is it correct to state BBC sessions here when only one is specified or does the source say there was multiple ones?
"cut of the film but was" → "cut of the film, but was"
"a more
folk-inspired version of the track with" → "a more
folk-inspired number with" to be less wordy
"called it superior to Bowie's entire debut album and acknowledged its sound" → "called the song superior to Bowie's entire debut album and acknowledged the sound"