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Reviewer: Amitchell125 ( talk · contribs) 06:08, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
Happy to review the article. AM
Additionally,
Additionally,
The review of this section is incomplete, as more research of his career is required (see comments of sources below).
Failing the article now, as it appears to have been nominated well before it was ready to be. It has an incomplete lead section, and lacks information that should be included (e.g. his personal life, but possible others of his life as well). The biography (and available other sources) should be used as references before the article is re-nominated. Amitchell125 ( talk) 06:29, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 ( talk · contribs) 06:08, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
Happy to review the article. AM
Additionally,
Additionally,
The review of this section is incomplete, as more research of his career is required (see comments of sources below).
Failing the article now, as it appears to have been nominated well before it was ready to be. It has an incomplete lead section, and lacks information that should be included (e.g. his personal life, but possible others of his life as well). The biography (and available other sources) should be used as references before the article is re-nominated. Amitchell125 ( talk) 06:29, 21 July 2023 (UTC)