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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 04:50, 1 September 2018 (UTC) reply

Given I've done one of the class, I thought I'd pick this one up as well. A few comments:

• better off not starting a sentence with "And" → "And so Leipzig"
  • Done
• perhaps put the range of boilers in the infobox?
  • Done
• consider linking in the column headers of the table, keel laying etc
  • I think bold text links are advised against
• add that the Civil War of 1891 was in Chile
  • Chile was in that sentence at one point but must've gotten removed during a rewrite and I didn't notice...
• "being recalled to East Africa"
  • Done
• suggest "She was raised in 1921 and broken up in the same year."
  • How about just "that year"?
• images are all ok

That's me done. Nice work. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 05:04, 1 September 2018 (UTC) reply

Thanks for another review! Parsecboy ( talk) 10:18, 1 September 2018 (UTC) reply

@ Peacemaker67: - is there anything else you'd like to see done? Parsecboy ( talk) 11:59, 10 September 2018 (UTC) reply

No, just fell off my radar, sorry. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 02:59, 11 September 2018 (UTC) reply

No problem - I claimed and then forgot to do this one last week ;) Parsecboy ( talk) 12:00, 11 September 2018 (UTC) reply