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Hi Fieryninja, the editor added a tagged and it said that my page look like an advertisement. Can you tell me how do I improve my page so that it won't be look like an advertisement? Striker2020 ( talk) 05:15, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
- Striker2020 you need to remove any promotional wording and make sure it is written in a neutral way - see WP:NPOV. I noticed some sentences have been copied from source so they need to be reworded. I can have a look through it and check it over if that helps. Fieryninja ( talk) 07:05, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
Fieryninja I found the Brickfanatics said the first wave of Bandmates and BeatBoxes already retired last year[ [1]] but the Brickset[ [2]] and Brickeconomy[ [3]] said not retire yet. But I'm not quite sure which one is the right one? Striker2020 ( talk) 08:53, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
- Hi Striker2020 I think you should leave them in as not yet retired because they are still available on the official site, so until they get removed from sale I think they aren't really retired. You can always update it later. Fieryninja ( talk) 09:02, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
Sesc — Preceding unsigned comment added by 196.189.245.131 ( talk) 13:38, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
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Hi Fieryninja, the editor added a tagged and it said that my page look like an advertisement. Can you tell me how do I improve my page so that it won't be look like an advertisement? Striker2020 ( talk) 05:15, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
- Striker2020 you need to remove any promotional wording and make sure it is written in a neutral way - see WP:NPOV. I noticed some sentences have been copied from source so they need to be reworded. I can have a look through it and check it over if that helps. Fieryninja ( talk) 07:05, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
Fieryninja I found the Brickfanatics said the first wave of Bandmates and BeatBoxes already retired last year[ [1]] but the Brickset[ [2]] and Brickeconomy[ [3]] said not retire yet. But I'm not quite sure which one is the right one? Striker2020 ( talk) 08:53, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
- Hi Striker2020 I think you should leave them in as not yet retired because they are still available on the official site, so until they get removed from sale I think they aren't really retired. You can always update it later. Fieryninja ( talk) 09:02, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
Sesc — Preceding unsigned comment added by 196.189.245.131 ( talk) 13:38, 25 February 2024 (UTC)