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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott ( talk · contribs) 02:51, 3 July 2014 (UTC) reply

I'll do this one. Time to cut the "media and drama" backlog. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 02:51, 3 July 2014 (UTC) reply

• The lead should only be 2 paragraphs per WP:LEAD.
• It also should be rejigged. Prinz had 3 Oscar nominations; this should be one of the first things mentioned and yet it's not there.
• Lead should use his middle name
• "Leroy Jerome Prinz" not LeRoy?
• ""introducing the American strut step" only needs one "
• "during World War I" you said this earlier in the paragraph
• Why does the Career section not mention his three Oscar nominations?
• His Golden Globe win is also not mentioned
• Two paragraphs in "Career" are not sourced
• Any info on his personal life? IMDB says he had a kid named LeRoy Jr.

Overall I think this is close to meeting the GA criteria and will place it on hold. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 21:27, 3 July 2014 (UTC) reply

 Done Thanks very much for reviewing this. Coretheapple ( talk) 13:39, 8 July 2014 (UTC) reply