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I will review this today! --
K. Peake 07:46, 4 August 2022 (UTC)reply
Infobox and lead
Shouldn't Ultra be added to the infobox?
Only the label for the original release should be listed, which is Panik here.
"to distribute "Later Bitches" internationally." → "to distribute the song internationally."
Remove among others from the end of the reception sentence since that adds nothing of substance
The breakthrough hit part is not really sourced
Removed
"number ten in Romania." → "number 10 in Romania." per
MOS:NUM
"It also notably charted at" → "It further charted at"
"an official music video was uploaded" → "a
music video was uploaded" with the wikilink
"where the track received a" → "where it received a"
Background
Retitle to Background and composition, moving the comp here
To avoid having very very very small sections, I created "Background and composition". On many instances, the "Background" section also encompasses info on the song's release process, so I think this should be fine. Also I prefer this to "Release and reception", since IMO, those don't have anything in common. I hope this is alright.
[5] should be solely at the end of the sentence
"he addressed this matter" → "he addressed this discussion"
"pointing out that at the time of the article's release in September 2018, there" → "pointing out in September 2018 there"
Make comp the last para of this section
Release and composition
The release para can be moved to reception as I will further instruct, to avoid overly short size
Img looks good!
You have written various countries, yet only the UK and the US; maybe add a ref with numerous citations at the end?
I just added 3 more refs, hope that is fine.
Only the German release is sourced in the third sentence
"was eventually released by" → "was later released by"
"in front of a 5,000-people audience," → "in front of an audience of 5,000,"
"The ceremony further used" → "The ceremony also used"
Why is NRJ not linked on the first mention instead?
Track listing
Good
Charts
Weekly charts
Should German Airplay really be included when the main one is already there?
It's a split ranking, focusing on airplay only (I don't even think those are counted into the official ranking). The source is trustworthy and the chart has gained a reputation, I think this should be included.
Monthly charts
Good
Year-end charts
Split these tables into different ones, so when someone wants to sort the different years it doesn't do both at once
Certifications
Good
Release history
Maybe change 25 May 2018 release to various and merge those citations into one ref?
I usually do this when a song is released on the same date in many, many, maybe almost all countries. In this case, it is only 6 countries, and I think the reader should be aware of this.
Why are refs 8 and 16 cited as iTunes Store when the rest cite Apple Music? Also, numerous Apple citations are missing the language parameter when they are in foreign ones that opt to translate upon opening.
Fix
MOS:QWQ issues with refs 19 and 29, also what exactly makes this a reliable source?
You are right, I'm not 100% sure. It is a popular radio station in Greece. I removed the 150 million streams claim, but I think the info about the awards show can remain since it is noncontroversial information.
Refs 40, 41, 42 and 44 are not consistent with the archive date formatting
Cartoon network freak I will allow for that completely, being on holiday myself at the moment so not as active as usual! --
K. Peake 15:19, 12 August 2022 (UTC)reply
✓Pass now, I am happy with your response even though it may be late and I did some brief copy editing myself! --
K. Peake 20:22, 14 August 2022 (UTC)reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Electronic music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Electronic music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Electronic musicWikipedia:WikiProject Electronic musicTemplate:WikiProject Electronic musicelectronic music articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
songs on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SongsWikipedia:WikiProject SongsTemplate:WikiProject Songssong articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Pop music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of articles related to
pop music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Pop musicWikipedia:WikiProject Pop musicTemplate:WikiProject Pop musicPop music articles
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
I will review this today! --
K. Peake 07:46, 4 August 2022 (UTC)reply
Infobox and lead
Shouldn't Ultra be added to the infobox?
Only the label for the original release should be listed, which is Panik here.
"to distribute "Later Bitches" internationally." → "to distribute the song internationally."
Remove among others from the end of the reception sentence since that adds nothing of substance
The breakthrough hit part is not really sourced
Removed
"number ten in Romania." → "number 10 in Romania." per
MOS:NUM
"It also notably charted at" → "It further charted at"
"an official music video was uploaded" → "a
music video was uploaded" with the wikilink
"where the track received a" → "where it received a"
Background
Retitle to Background and composition, moving the comp here
To avoid having very very very small sections, I created "Background and composition". On many instances, the "Background" section also encompasses info on the song's release process, so I think this should be fine. Also I prefer this to "Release and reception", since IMO, those don't have anything in common. I hope this is alright.
[5] should be solely at the end of the sentence
"he addressed this matter" → "he addressed this discussion"
"pointing out that at the time of the article's release in September 2018, there" → "pointing out in September 2018 there"
Make comp the last para of this section
Release and composition
The release para can be moved to reception as I will further instruct, to avoid overly short size
Img looks good!
You have written various countries, yet only the UK and the US; maybe add a ref with numerous citations at the end?
I just added 3 more refs, hope that is fine.
Only the German release is sourced in the third sentence
"was eventually released by" → "was later released by"
"in front of a 5,000-people audience," → "in front of an audience of 5,000,"
"The ceremony further used" → "The ceremony also used"
Why is NRJ not linked on the first mention instead?
Track listing
Good
Charts
Weekly charts
Should German Airplay really be included when the main one is already there?
It's a split ranking, focusing on airplay only (I don't even think those are counted into the official ranking). The source is trustworthy and the chart has gained a reputation, I think this should be included.
Monthly charts
Good
Year-end charts
Split these tables into different ones, so when someone wants to sort the different years it doesn't do both at once
Certifications
Good
Release history
Maybe change 25 May 2018 release to various and merge those citations into one ref?
I usually do this when a song is released on the same date in many, many, maybe almost all countries. In this case, it is only 6 countries, and I think the reader should be aware of this.
Why are refs 8 and 16 cited as iTunes Store when the rest cite Apple Music? Also, numerous Apple citations are missing the language parameter when they are in foreign ones that opt to translate upon opening.
Fix
MOS:QWQ issues with refs 19 and 29, also what exactly makes this a reliable source?
You are right, I'm not 100% sure. It is a popular radio station in Greece. I removed the 150 million streams claim, but I think the info about the awards show can remain since it is noncontroversial information.
Refs 40, 41, 42 and 44 are not consistent with the archive date formatting
Cartoon network freak I will allow for that completely, being on holiday myself at the moment so not as active as usual! --
K. Peake 15:19, 12 August 2022 (UTC)reply
✓Pass now, I am happy with your response even though it may be late and I did some brief copy editing myself! --
K. Peake 20:22, 14 August 2022 (UTC)reply