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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 00:10, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
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The Lansing Mall was built just outside the city of Lansing, Michigan, the state's capital, within Delta Township along M-43 (Saginaw Highway). Built by Forbes-Cohen, it officially opened to the public on July 31, 1969.Reduce this to one sentence; it's kind of redundant as it is.
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Dissolve and disperse all two pictures in the gallery in the article prose.
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The Lansing Mall was built just outside the city of Lansing, Michigan, the state's capital, within Delta Township along M-43 (Saginaw Highway). Built by Forbes-Cohen, it officially opened to the public on July 31, 1969.Reduce this to one sentence; it's kind of redundant as it is.
Panera Bread[22]MOS:REFPUNCT
Dissolve and disperse all two pictures in the gallery in the article prose.
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