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Nominator: PresN ( talk · contribs) 03:50, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Vacant0 ( talk · contribs) 23:45, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'll be reviewing this article as part of the ongoing
GAN backlog drive. --
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and PlayStation 4,..." → "and for PlayStation 4,"
is an 2D side-scrolling..." – replace "an" with "a"
Enemies respawn whenever Laika dies, or if she leaves and re-enters an area" – remove the comma
These weapons have a very limited amount of ammo, but can be reloaded indefinitely by performing a full backwards rotation of the motorcycle." – remove the comma
The weapons are gathered throughout the course of the game, and can be upgraded in the village with resources to have more ammo or reload with less rotation." – remove the comma
retrieving the bags causes them to disappear" – replace "causes" with "cause"
Eventually the rampant consumption..." → "Eventually, the rampant consumption"
non-birds hide from the patrolling Bird solidiers" – replace "hide" with "hid"
passing the abilities to them in turn" → "passing the abilities on to them in turn"
runs away from home to search herself" → "runs away from home to search for herself"
a nuclear weapon which will eradicate..." → "a nuclear weapon that will eradicate"
and along with the motorcycle were intended..." → "and along with the motorcycle, they were intended"
artstyle..." → "art style"
had frustrations with some mechanics" – remove had
that succeeded at connecting to players emotionally" → "that succeeded in connecting with players emotionally"
and the way that visual and level design..." → "and the way that the visual and level design"
@ PresN: I'll promote the article once these issues get addressed. The review will be on hold for a week. Good job on the article. -- Vacant0 ( talk • contribs) 13:17, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Nominator: PresN ( talk · contribs) 03:50, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Vacant0 ( talk · contribs) 23:45, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'll be reviewing this article as part of the ongoing
GAN backlog drive. --
Vacant0 (
talk •
contribs)
23:45, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
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Overall: |
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and PlayStation 4,..." → "and for PlayStation 4,"
is an 2D side-scrolling..." – replace "an" with "a"
Enemies respawn whenever Laika dies, or if she leaves and re-enters an area" – remove the comma
These weapons have a very limited amount of ammo, but can be reloaded indefinitely by performing a full backwards rotation of the motorcycle." – remove the comma
The weapons are gathered throughout the course of the game, and can be upgraded in the village with resources to have more ammo or reload with less rotation." – remove the comma
retrieving the bags causes them to disappear" – replace "causes" with "cause"
Eventually the rampant consumption..." → "Eventually, the rampant consumption"
non-birds hide from the patrolling Bird solidiers" – replace "hide" with "hid"
passing the abilities to them in turn" → "passing the abilities on to them in turn"
runs away from home to search herself" → "runs away from home to search for herself"
a nuclear weapon which will eradicate..." → "a nuclear weapon that will eradicate"
and along with the motorcycle were intended..." → "and along with the motorcycle, they were intended"
artstyle..." → "art style"
had frustrations with some mechanics" – remove had
that succeeded at connecting to players emotionally" → "that succeeded in connecting with players emotionally"
and the way that visual and level design..." → "and the way that the visual and level design"
@ PresN: I'll promote the article once these issues get addressed. The review will be on hold for a week. Good job on the article. -- Vacant0 ( talk • contribs) 13:17, 27 July 2024 (UTC)