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with the latest evidence of Neriglissar being alive being from April 556 BC suggest with the last evidence of Neriglissar's life dating in April 556 BC
hardly surprising given that he had no time to complete any accomplishments would remove this; lack of accomplishments has rarely held back royalty from singing praises, and I think how short his reign covered the lack of inscriptions.
Though Labashi-Marduk being the grandson of Nebuchadnezzar through his mother would have made him connected to the royal dynasty suggest though his mother would have connected him to the royal dynasty as the grandson of Nebuchadnezzar, Labashi-Marduk...
Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.
Lede
with the latest evidence of Neriglissar being alive being from April 556 BC suggest with the last evidence of Neriglissar's life dating in April 556 BC
hardly surprising given that he had no time to complete any accomplishments would remove this; lack of accomplishments has rarely held back royalty from singing praises, and I think how short his reign covered the lack of inscriptions.
Though Labashi-Marduk being the grandson of Nebuchadnezzar through his mother would have made him connected to the royal dynasty suggest though his mother would have connected him to the royal dynasty as the grandson of Nebuchadnezzar, Labashi-Marduk...