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As per the request for feedback in the assessment request, I have the following suggestions for the article:
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 23:05, 24 June 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Garyvp71 ( talk) 21:22, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
I am really not convinced that the tapered section of the underwater belt was to be discarded. Forstmeier & Breyer mention nothing like that. Similar, later designs (like the GK XXXX Series) also still have that belt, it would not make sence to discard it, since it would not only weaken torpedo resistance but also resistence against underwater hits from heavy artillery. Given Germanys concern to make their ships steadfast and hard to sink, this decision would throw all that overboard. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.226.190.45 ( talk) 17:58, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
According to the German language Wikipedia article it is L 20 e α and the German language book Deutsche Grosskampfschiffe 1915 Bis 1918, there is a L24 α. — Preceding unsigned comment added by The Dominatormaximus ( talk • contribs) 18:27, 26 December 2013 (UTC)
Did a cheeky little ce, blammed a few mad commas, typos, isbn 13'd the references, checked find dup refs, dupe wikilinks, auto ed. RV as desired. Keith-264 ( talk) 11:02, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
The text says that L2 would've had 10 x 380 mm guns, but the table below states that it would have 8 like L1 and L3. So what's the correct number? Cléééston ( talk) 00:41, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
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As per the request for feedback in the assessment request, I have the following suggestions for the article:
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 23:05, 24 June 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Garyvp71 ( talk) 21:22, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
I am really not convinced that the tapered section of the underwater belt was to be discarded. Forstmeier & Breyer mention nothing like that. Similar, later designs (like the GK XXXX Series) also still have that belt, it would not make sence to discard it, since it would not only weaken torpedo resistance but also resistence against underwater hits from heavy artillery. Given Germanys concern to make their ships steadfast and hard to sink, this decision would throw all that overboard. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.226.190.45 ( talk) 17:58, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
According to the German language Wikipedia article it is L 20 e α and the German language book Deutsche Grosskampfschiffe 1915 Bis 1918, there is a L24 α. — Preceding unsigned comment added by The Dominatormaximus ( talk • contribs) 18:27, 26 December 2013 (UTC)
Did a cheeky little ce, blammed a few mad commas, typos, isbn 13'd the references, checked find dup refs, dupe wikilinks, auto ed. RV as desired. Keith-264 ( talk) 11:02, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
The text says that L2 would've had 10 x 380 mm guns, but the table below states that it would have 8 like L1 and L3. So what's the correct number? Cléééston ( talk) 00:41, 21 September 2023 (UTC)