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Copy editing for syntax

Some of the sentences don't make sense. It almost sounds like it was badly translated from another language. Maybe it's just me but it gives the whole article a disjointed feeling I think.

We need a photo too. —Preceding unsigned comment added by SDH3 Comic Fan ( talkcontribs) 09:38, 20 September 2010 (UTC) reply

We had a photo before, I we could modify the text.... but now the page only redirects to a "minor" dc comics characters or something... I think that we still can get better this page. Arussom ( talk) 12:30, 24 April 2011 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Copy editing for syntax

Some of the sentences don't make sense. It almost sounds like it was badly translated from another language. Maybe it's just me but it gives the whole article a disjointed feeling I think.

We need a photo too. —Preceding unsigned comment added by SDH3 Comic Fan ( talkcontribs) 09:38, 20 September 2010 (UTC) reply

We had a photo before, I we could modify the text.... but now the page only redirects to a "minor" dc comics characters or something... I think that we still can get better this page. Arussom ( talk) 12:30, 24 April 2011 (UTC) reply


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