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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ktheju tokës/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk · contribs) 19:01, 13 April 2020 (UTC) reply


Infobox

  • Needs alt.
  • No composition
  • Sokol Marsi → not mentioned elsewhere, no source on the body of the article

 Done

Lead

  • is a song by Albanian singer Jonida Maliqi. → song by Albanian singer Jonida Maliqi.
I think the current version is good ..-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:45, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
Remove recorded. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 21:55, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • produced by Enis Mullaj and Sokol Marsi. → see below
  • missing who composed the track
  • it lyrically makes reference to the theme of migration, → Lyrically addresses the theme of migration,
  • where it has since accumulated a total of 2.5 million views as of 2020. → not relevant
  • Should have a reference to the critical reception of the song

 Done

Background and composition

  • produced by Enis Mullaj → not on given source
  • and remastered in the Svenska → and remastered at Svenska

 Done

Critical reception

  • several reviews from individual critics → name two or three

 Done

Promotion

  • Retitle the section Music Video and promotion
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:53, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Move the section below
@ MarioSoulTruthFan: You mean to move it under the "At Eurovision" section?-- Lorik17 ( talk) 15:45, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
The secton should be below the eurovision one. Not under its umbrella. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 15:52, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
I don't feel the position of this section is such a big issue but ok; i guess its better to stay above the Eurovision section, its like a chronological order.-- Lorik17 ( talk) 16:00, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • where as of 2020 it has since amassed a total of 2.5 million views → remove, not notable
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Maliqi embarked on a small tour → three shows are not a tour
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Festivali i Këngës

  • Fine

Tel Aviv

  • According to the "rules, → According to the rules, "

 Done

Personnel

  • Two collums

 Done

Track listing

  • Fine

Release history

  • Need to add the Digital downloads with the karaoke vesion
Its within the source "38"-- Lorik17 ( talk) 21:20, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
Add here that release. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 21:54, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply

 Done

References

  • Don't SHOUT in references (see refs: 12, 17, 22...)

 Not doneThere are others. 2, 11, 29 and 34. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 17:06, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply

@ MarioSoulTruthFan: could you explain, i don't understand what you mean with "shout in references"-- Lorik17 ( talk) 17:35, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ Iaof2017: Everthything is in capital letters. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 19:57, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ MarioSoulTruthFan:  Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 10:40, 17 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Either wikilink only once each source or wikilink everything, I prefer the former.
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 15:20, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Wiwiblogs are missing author and dates, same for eurovision sites
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 15:20, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Metro is work
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Overall

@ MarioSoulTruthFan: I think most of the issues were fixed now.-- Lorik17 ( talk) 15:39, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ Iaof2017: See lead, promotion and references, you missed a couple. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 15:43, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ Iaof2017: made a minor fix, please take a look. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 14:18, 17 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you; I think everything is now ok?-- Lorik17 ( talk) 14:26, 17 April 2020 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ktheju tokës/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk · contribs) 19:01, 13 April 2020 (UTC) reply


Infobox

  • Needs alt.
  • No composition
  • Sokol Marsi → not mentioned elsewhere, no source on the body of the article

 Done

Lead

  • is a song by Albanian singer Jonida Maliqi. → song by Albanian singer Jonida Maliqi.
I think the current version is good ..-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:45, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
Remove recorded. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 21:55, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • produced by Enis Mullaj and Sokol Marsi. → see below
  • missing who composed the track
  • it lyrically makes reference to the theme of migration, → Lyrically addresses the theme of migration,
  • where it has since accumulated a total of 2.5 million views as of 2020. → not relevant
  • Should have a reference to the critical reception of the song

 Done

Background and composition

  • produced by Enis Mullaj → not on given source
  • and remastered in the Svenska → and remastered at Svenska

 Done

Critical reception

  • several reviews from individual critics → name two or three

 Done

Promotion

  • Retitle the section Music Video and promotion
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:53, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Move the section below
@ MarioSoulTruthFan: You mean to move it under the "At Eurovision" section?-- Lorik17 ( talk) 15:45, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
The secton should be below the eurovision one. Not under its umbrella. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 15:52, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
I don't feel the position of this section is such a big issue but ok; i guess its better to stay above the Eurovision section, its like a chronological order.-- Lorik17 ( talk) 16:00, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • where as of 2020 it has since amassed a total of 2.5 million views → remove, not notable
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Maliqi embarked on a small tour → three shows are not a tour
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Festivali i Këngës

  • Fine

Tel Aviv

  • According to the "rules, → According to the rules, "

 Done

Personnel

  • Two collums

 Done

Track listing

  • Fine

Release history

  • Need to add the Digital downloads with the karaoke vesion
Its within the source "38"-- Lorik17 ( talk) 21:20, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply
Add here that release. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 21:54, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply

 Done

References

  • Don't SHOUT in references (see refs: 12, 17, 22...)

 Not doneThere are others. 2, 11, 29 and 34. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 17:06, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply

@ MarioSoulTruthFan: could you explain, i don't understand what you mean with "shout in references"-- Lorik17 ( talk) 17:35, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ Iaof2017: Everthything is in capital letters. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 19:57, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ MarioSoulTruthFan:  Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 10:40, 17 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Either wikilink only once each source or wikilink everything, I prefer the former.
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 15:20, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Wiwiblogs are missing author and dates, same for eurovision sites
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 15:20, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Metro is work
 Done-- Lorik17 ( talk) 20:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Overall

@ MarioSoulTruthFan: I think most of the issues were fixed now.-- Lorik17 ( talk) 15:39, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ Iaof2017: See lead, promotion and references, you missed a couple. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 15:43, 15 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ Iaof2017: made a minor fix, please take a look. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 14:18, 17 April 2020 (UTC) reply
@ MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you; I think everything is now ok?-- Lorik17 ( talk) 14:26, 17 April 2020 (UTC) reply

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