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Taking into account this version, the reason for the GA reassessment, the problems include ;
- List of unreliable sources : 1, 3, 4, 7, 8, 10, 11, 13, 24, 25, 27, 28, 39
- 1 Dead link tagged.
- Monotonous tone, eg. "The film...the film...the film...". Thorough copyedit required for ALL the sections as prose is of haggard quality.
- Many of the characters mentioned in the "Cast" and the infobox are not present in the plot section.
- Overlinking.
To name a few, these warrant a go. They need to be fixed. Secret of success ( talk) 13:07, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
Due to lack of response, I am delisting this. Regards, Secret of success ( talk) 06:21, 22 March 2012 (UTC)
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Taking into account this version, the reason for the GA reassessment, the problems include ;
- List of unreliable sources : 1, 3, 4, 7, 8, 10, 11, 13, 24, 25, 27, 28, 39
- 1 Dead link tagged.
- Monotonous tone, eg. "The film...the film...the film...". Thorough copyedit required for ALL the sections as prose is of haggard quality.
- Many of the characters mentioned in the "Cast" and the infobox are not present in the plot section.
- Overlinking.
To name a few, these warrant a go. They need to be fixed. Secret of success ( talk) 13:07, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
Due to lack of response, I am delisting this. Regards, Secret of success ( talk) 06:21, 22 March 2012 (UTC)