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Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (
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01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
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Will take this one. Regards,
Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (
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01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
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- Whenever you're ready,
Krishna.
23 editor (
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16:48, 15 February 2017 (UTC)
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- Lead;
- they were sprayed with heavy machine guns; "sprayed" is a bit awkward, use a better a word
- Mention the dates of act i.e. 15–20 October 1941 in the lead
- italicize Wehrmacht, wherever in the article
- Section 1;
- From
that time then
- Yugoslavia was almost
completely surrounded
- Yugoslavia was
quickly overwhelmed
- Section 2;
- prefix the rank of Milan Nedić
- Section 3; all good
- Section 4; all good
-
9.9% confidence, violation unlikely
- Sorry, almost missed this one. Anyways, excellent work. Regards,
Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (
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02:12, 17 February 2017 (UTC)
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All done, Krishna. Thanks for the review.
23 editor (
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19:22, 17 February 2017 (UTC)
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GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b (
MoS for
lead,
layout,
word choice,
fiction, and
lists):
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section):
b (citations to
reliable sources):
c (
OR):
d (
copyvio and
plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects):
b (
focused):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards,
Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (
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01:46, 18 February 2017 (UTC)
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