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@
Gog the Mild: Hi Gog. I hope, you are well and safe. I have been working on this article since long time. I want to expand it further, and make it GA. I am going to put a request for copy editing on GOCE. Before that, can you please help me in rearranging all the things. Ex. Which text should be kept in which section? Should we create new section for any particular things? No urgency. Thanks. --
Gazal world (
talk)
15:38, 8 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Hi
Gazal world, I hope that you are keeping well. I am not an expert on literature articles, but so far as I can tell everything is in the correct place. It needs a copy edit, but to me it is ready for it.
Gog the Mild (
talk)
18:03, 10 April 2020 (UTC)reply
It looks good. A couple of things that I would tweak, but that's just personal preference. You have received a very good copy edit from
FiveFaintFootprints, better than I could have done. It looks more than ready for GAN to me.
Gog the Mild (
talk)
11:48, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Pandurang is the son of well-to-do farmer → a well-to-do farmer
Done
he gives responsibility for management of → for the management of the
Done
now one among many unemployed → now one of many unemployed
Done
in the company of friends → whose friends?
clarified → his friends
his poorer friends → poor
Done
Theme and techniques
Over a six year period → Over a six-year period
Done
influenced by existential philosophy → already linked in the lead
Done (removed link)
Like other existential novels → same article (already linked)
Done (removed link)
exploring existentialist ideas such as an obsession with birth and death, dread, alienation, and absurdity → cite sources
I have added citation at the end of each paragraph which verifies whole paragraph. Should I place citation repeatedly in a single paragraph supported by the same citation? If you suggest so, I will do. But I don't see any point in repeating the citation multiple times in a same paragraph when whole paragraph is supported by the same citation. --
Gazal world (
talk)
17:17, 14 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Pandurang is estranged from his father, and has been from childhood. → cite sources
Done
the patriarchal value system characteristic of traditional Indian life.→ cite sources
Done
found anything meaningful in his experience of village life. → cite sources
Done
style, reading like a series of diary entries. → cite sources
Done
I have hidden the whole part (two sentences) from the article. This is the only unsourced part in the article. It was added by article creator. --
Gazal world (
talk)
18:58, 14 April 2020 (UTC)reply
serves as an instrument revealing his worldview. → cite sources
See above (hidden)
which ultimately uncover to them the absurdity and pathos of their condition → cite sources
See above (hidden)
including: autobiography, the diary, the novel, Indian folktales, folk narrative, and medieval hagiography. → cite sources
Done
the diary, the novel → no need to wikilink novel
Done
Reception
both for its portrayal of the professorial class, and for its description of the profane world → cite sources
Done
Marathi literature, because of its open-ended quality and its potential for varied interpretation → cite sources
Done
Chandrashekhar Jahagirdar, Vilas Sarang, Sukanya Aagase, Rekha Inamdar-Sane, and Vasudev Sawant → cite sources
Done
Other
For the table use {{Abbr|Ref.|Reference(s)}}.
Done
November-December 1980 → November–December 1980
Done
experimental plays - art and culture → experimental plays – art and culture
I have used a blog as a reference to prepare a list of translation/translators. I have verified that these translations are available in respective languages. Due to lack of any citation regarding this elsewhere, I have used a blog as a reference. I think this translation table would not require any high quality reference either so please consider this reference as an exception. --
Gazal world (
talk)
17:18, 14 April 2020 (UTC)reply
@
CAPTAIN MEDUSA: I have removed the blog from the reference, and have added primary sources (the translated books itself) in reference. Still there are three translations left without reference. If you tell me, I will hide them from the table. All other queries have been resolved. --
Gazal world (
talk)
16:50, 15 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
This article is written in
Indian English, which has its own spelling conventions (colour, travelled, centre, analysed, defence) and some terms that are used in it may be different or absent from other
varieties of English. According to the
relevant style guide, this should not be changed without
broad consensus.
This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following
WikiProjects:
This article is within the scope of WikiProject India, which aims to improve Wikipedia's coverage of
India-related topics. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page.IndiaWikipedia:WikiProject IndiaTemplate:WikiProject IndiaIndia articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Novels, an attempt to build a comprehensive and detailed guide to
novels,
novellas,
novelettes and
short stories on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the project and contribute to the general Project discussion to talk over new ideas and suggestions.NovelsWikipedia:WikiProject NovelsTemplate:WikiProject Novelsnovel articles
A fact from Kosala (novel) appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 May 2020 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
@
Gog the Mild: Hi Gog. I hope, you are well and safe. I have been working on this article since long time. I want to expand it further, and make it GA. I am going to put a request for copy editing on GOCE. Before that, can you please help me in rearranging all the things. Ex. Which text should be kept in which section? Should we create new section for any particular things? No urgency. Thanks. --
Gazal world (
talk)
15:38, 8 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Hi
Gazal world, I hope that you are keeping well. I am not an expert on literature articles, but so far as I can tell everything is in the correct place. It needs a copy edit, but to me it is ready for it.
Gog the Mild (
talk)
18:03, 10 April 2020 (UTC)reply
It looks good. A couple of things that I would tweak, but that's just personal preference. You have received a very good copy edit from
FiveFaintFootprints, better than I could have done. It looks more than ready for GAN to me.
Gog the Mild (
talk)
11:48, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Pandurang is the son of well-to-do farmer → a well-to-do farmer
Done
he gives responsibility for management of → for the management of the
Done
now one among many unemployed → now one of many unemployed
Done
in the company of friends → whose friends?
clarified → his friends
his poorer friends → poor
Done
Theme and techniques
Over a six year period → Over a six-year period
Done
influenced by existential philosophy → already linked in the lead
Done (removed link)
Like other existential novels → same article (already linked)
Done (removed link)
exploring existentialist ideas such as an obsession with birth and death, dread, alienation, and absurdity → cite sources
I have added citation at the end of each paragraph which verifies whole paragraph. Should I place citation repeatedly in a single paragraph supported by the same citation? If you suggest so, I will do. But I don't see any point in repeating the citation multiple times in a same paragraph when whole paragraph is supported by the same citation. --
Gazal world (
talk)
17:17, 14 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Pandurang is estranged from his father, and has been from childhood. → cite sources
Done
the patriarchal value system characteristic of traditional Indian life.→ cite sources
Done
found anything meaningful in his experience of village life. → cite sources
Done
style, reading like a series of diary entries. → cite sources
Done
I have hidden the whole part (two sentences) from the article. This is the only unsourced part in the article. It was added by article creator. --
Gazal world (
talk)
18:58, 14 April 2020 (UTC)reply
serves as an instrument revealing his worldview. → cite sources
See above (hidden)
which ultimately uncover to them the absurdity and pathos of their condition → cite sources
See above (hidden)
including: autobiography, the diary, the novel, Indian folktales, folk narrative, and medieval hagiography. → cite sources
Done
the diary, the novel → no need to wikilink novel
Done
Reception
both for its portrayal of the professorial class, and for its description of the profane world → cite sources
Done
Marathi literature, because of its open-ended quality and its potential for varied interpretation → cite sources
Done
Chandrashekhar Jahagirdar, Vilas Sarang, Sukanya Aagase, Rekha Inamdar-Sane, and Vasudev Sawant → cite sources
Done
Other
For the table use {{Abbr|Ref.|Reference(s)}}.
Done
November-December 1980 → November–December 1980
Done
experimental plays - art and culture → experimental plays – art and culture
I have used a blog as a reference to prepare a list of translation/translators. I have verified that these translations are available in respective languages. Due to lack of any citation regarding this elsewhere, I have used a blog as a reference. I think this translation table would not require any high quality reference either so please consider this reference as an exception. --
Gazal world (
talk)
17:18, 14 April 2020 (UTC)reply
@
CAPTAIN MEDUSA: I have removed the blog from the reference, and have added primary sources (the translated books itself) in reference. Still there are three translations left without reference. If you tell me, I will hide them from the table. All other queries have been resolved. --
Gazal world (
talk)
16:50, 15 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.