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Reviewer: FunkMonk ( talk · contribs) 09:07, 13 May 2016 (UTC)
- I haven't reviewed any GANs for a while (and am now out of the GA cup, it seems), but this seems like a nice one to start with... FunkMonk ( talk) 09:07, 13 May 2016 (UTC)
- What does the scientific name mean?
- I know what "tragus" means (he-goat) but no idea about "oreo".
- Could we have scientific names in the cladogram as well?
- Done
- Nothing on differences between subspecies?
- Added.
- "and white lips and chin. " and "The underbelly, chin and lips are all white." Redundancy?
- Fixed
- "The incisors might even get damaged while grooming." I'd add "damaged by the hairs" or some such, the sentence doesn't work well alone.
- Done
- "include the caracal, eagles, hyaena, jackals, leopard, serval and snakes." Why are some singular and some plural?
- Fixed
- "to protect it from the eye of predators" From view? Eye seems a bit dramatic...
- Yours is more scientific :)
- "It is feared to be extinct in Burundi.[1][19]" Doesn't this make more sense unde threats? Why did it go extinct there?
- This section describes the distribution, past and present. I feel it is best placed here.
- "of which a few have been considered to be independent species" Which?
- Depends on the source, I have not seen all so I say "some". Actually it seems most have been treated as independent species at least in Ungulate Taxonomy.
- "at the shoulder. weighs from 8 to" Full stop seems weird here?
- Fixed
- "might last as long as one of the partners dies." Seems a bit weirdly worded. Until one dies?
- Done
- Perhaps left align the double image under description so it doens't create a square of white space under the taxobox?
- I tried it, but the text appears to stick to the image, which doesn't appear very nice to me.
Glad to meet you again! Now I am as busy as you were last month, I have a heap of GA noms (all taken up in the same week, as luck would have it!) and reviews. Will get to this soon. Sainsf ( talk · contribs) 14:05, 13 May 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: FunkMonk ( talk · contribs) 09:07, 13 May 2016 (UTC)
- I haven't reviewed any GANs for a while (and am now out of the GA cup, it seems), but this seems like a nice one to start with... FunkMonk ( talk) 09:07, 13 May 2016 (UTC)
- What does the scientific name mean?
- I know what "tragus" means (he-goat) but no idea about "oreo".
- Could we have scientific names in the cladogram as well?
- Done
- Nothing on differences between subspecies?
- Added.
- "and white lips and chin. " and "The underbelly, chin and lips are all white." Redundancy?
- Fixed
- "The incisors might even get damaged while grooming." I'd add "damaged by the hairs" or some such, the sentence doesn't work well alone.
- Done
- "include the caracal, eagles, hyaena, jackals, leopard, serval and snakes." Why are some singular and some plural?
- Fixed
- "to protect it from the eye of predators" From view? Eye seems a bit dramatic...
- Yours is more scientific :)
- "It is feared to be extinct in Burundi.[1][19]" Doesn't this make more sense unde threats? Why did it go extinct there?
- This section describes the distribution, past and present. I feel it is best placed here.
- "of which a few have been considered to be independent species" Which?
- Depends on the source, I have not seen all so I say "some". Actually it seems most have been treated as independent species at least in Ungulate Taxonomy.
- "at the shoulder. weighs from 8 to" Full stop seems weird here?
- Fixed
- "might last as long as one of the partners dies." Seems a bit weirdly worded. Until one dies?
- Done
- Perhaps left align the double image under description so it doens't create a square of white space under the taxobox?
- I tried it, but the text appears to stick to the image, which doesn't appear very nice to me.
Glad to meet you again! Now I am as busy as you were last month, I have a heap of GA noms (all taken up in the same week, as luck would have it!) and reviews. Will get to this soon. Sainsf ( talk · contribs) 14:05, 13 May 2016 (UTC)