Hey Will, I like your overview of the topic so far. Background information on the history of the the region, the tribes, and the salmon populations is crucial and you've placed it succinctly in the first paragraph. The content is well balanced at this point, and your stance is neutral from what I can tell. Nothing biases towards a certain direction.
I would like to see more on water quality if resources exist to talk about it (i.e. case studies, or news).
I found that the dwindling salmon population being a function of the damming and other diversions is relevant to my study of the Rhine river basin as infrastructure in the area has caused the same results. I hope I can place this information in my article somehow.
Overall, you're on your way to making a great article addition, or article itself. Best of luck! JamesMichaelC ( talk) 17:06, 31 March 2019 (UTC)
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Hey Will, I like your overview of the topic so far. Background information on the history of the the region, the tribes, and the salmon populations is crucial and you've placed it succinctly in the first paragraph. The content is well balanced at this point, and your stance is neutral from what I can tell. Nothing biases towards a certain direction.
I would like to see more on water quality if resources exist to talk about it (i.e. case studies, or news).
I found that the dwindling salmon population being a function of the damming and other diversions is relevant to my study of the Rhine river basin as infrastructure in the area has caused the same results. I hope I can place this information in my article somehow.
Overall, you're on your way to making a great article addition, or article itself. Best of luck! JamesMichaelC ( talk) 17:06, 31 March 2019 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 January 2019 and 8 May 2019. Further details are available
on the course page. Student editor(s):
WillKanz.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 17:24, 18 January 2022 (UTC)