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Reviewer: Numerounovedant ( talk · contribs) 15:28, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
I'll put comments soon, meanwhile I'd really appreciate it if you could review this for GA. Thanks either way. Numerounovedant Talk 15:30, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
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Not going to preemptively overhaul this review, but per this source analysis I think that the sentence about him being in a relationship with his GOT co-star needs either
Note that I'm not saying I agree or disagree that they are dating or anything like that. I just don't think Wikipedia should be playing the celeb gossip game, and should especially not be making double-BLP claims that are only explicitly supported by one BuzzFeed article. I am not that experienced with BLPs or celebrity gossip, so I am not actually sure if option (c) would be acceptable. Ideally, we could find a better source and go with option (a), but I suspect (b) might actually be the only viable option here if the article is to pass GA review. Hijiri 88 ( 聖 やや) 01:55, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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For the record, I also think that the photo in the lead is the worst of our three current photos of him. Yes, it is slightly more up-to-date (three years old as opposed to four or six years old), but he's staring right into the camera and squinting, apparently because of whatever that light source is that one can see reflecting off his face. I think that it should be switched out of the lead in favour of one of the others currently further down in the article. And my thinking this is not "vandalism" either. Hijiri 88 ( 聖 やや) 05:41, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
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The article needs entensive expansion: The GoT role needs to have reviews for his performance, and as he has been playing the role for a long time I am sure there must be commentary and news artciles on his own expereinces. Also, other roles need similar expansion. The lead needs to be reworked to comply with the MoS. The personal life is just one sentence, is that really all there is to his life> I strongly suggest some more research and substantial expansion here. Good luck. At this point I have to Fail this. Numerounovedant Talk 10:57, 7 June 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Numerounovedant ( talk · contribs) 15:28, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
I'll put comments soon, meanwhile I'd really appreciate it if you could review this for GA. Thanks either way. Numerounovedant Talk 15:30, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
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Not going to preemptively overhaul this review, but per this source analysis I think that the sentence about him being in a relationship with his GOT co-star needs either
Note that I'm not saying I agree or disagree that they are dating or anything like that. I just don't think Wikipedia should be playing the celeb gossip game, and should especially not be making double-BLP claims that are only explicitly supported by one BuzzFeed article. I am not that experienced with BLPs or celebrity gossip, so I am not actually sure if option (c) would be acceptable. Ideally, we could find a better source and go with option (a), but I suspect (b) might actually be the only viable option here if the article is to pass GA review. Hijiri 88 ( 聖 やや) 01:55, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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For the record, I also think that the photo in the lead is the worst of our three current photos of him. Yes, it is slightly more up-to-date (three years old as opposed to four or six years old), but he's staring right into the camera and squinting, apparently because of whatever that light source is that one can see reflecting off his face. I think that it should be switched out of the lead in favour of one of the others currently further down in the article. And my thinking this is not "vandalism" either. Hijiri 88 ( 聖 やや) 05:41, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)
The article needs entensive expansion: The GoT role needs to have reviews for his performance, and as he has been playing the role for a long time I am sure there must be commentary and news artciles on his own expereinces. Also, other roles need similar expansion. The lead needs to be reworked to comply with the MoS. The personal life is just one sentence, is that really all there is to his life> I strongly suggest some more research and substantial expansion here. Good luck. At this point I have to Fail this. Numerounovedant Talk 10:57, 7 June 2017 (UTC)