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Thoughts about the article from the creator of the article (February 2018)
Greetings from early 2018! I carried out some major editing to the '
In God We Trust article in February 2018 following news of a bill in the Florida House calling for 'In God We Trust' to be displayed in schools (including creating the Rep. Kimberly Daniels page). Kimberly Daniels is an interesting person, but I've only scratched the surface of the material that's out there. I think it would be good if someone beside myself would go back and proofread/copyedit the page as a whole. There's a lot more work that needs to be done to make this a perfect article, and I hope you will add something worthwhile. Thanks for reading.
Geographyinitiative (
talk) 14:29, 25 February 2018 (UTC)reply
I've purged a lot of the fluff and crap, but this article badly needs solid work. --
Orange Mike |
Talk 19:39, 14 February 2019 (UTC)reply
@
Orangemike: I presume that this edit might have been from Ms. Daniels: (
[1]). I feel sad that she felt hurt by the article. I tried to make everything as well-sourced as I could. Did I do anything violating the policies of Wikipedia? I don't think I did. Anyway, how can I now come back and make this article better while at the same time stating the facts as they are presented in the media? Thanks for any help. Ms. Daniels, if you are out there, I want to say that in writing this article, I tried to stick to the facts as they were presented in journalistic sources, and I will try to be even more diligent in confirming my sources for any claims made here in the future.
Geographyinitiative (
talk) 07:10, 6 October 2019 (UTC)reply
Lead rewrite
I added a lead rewrite template. Perhaps the "who performs exorcisms" belongs somewhere on the page, but I don't think it belongs in the lead. Some serious work still needs to be done on this, for sure.
Plandu (
talk) 05:17, 20 October 2019 (UTC)reply
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Thoughts about the article from the creator of the article (February 2018)
Greetings from early 2018! I carried out some major editing to the '
In God We Trust article in February 2018 following news of a bill in the Florida House calling for 'In God We Trust' to be displayed in schools (including creating the Rep. Kimberly Daniels page). Kimberly Daniels is an interesting person, but I've only scratched the surface of the material that's out there. I think it would be good if someone beside myself would go back and proofread/copyedit the page as a whole. There's a lot more work that needs to be done to make this a perfect article, and I hope you will add something worthwhile. Thanks for reading.
Geographyinitiative (
talk) 14:29, 25 February 2018 (UTC)reply
I've purged a lot of the fluff and crap, but this article badly needs solid work. --
Orange Mike |
Talk 19:39, 14 February 2019 (UTC)reply
@
Orangemike: I presume that this edit might have been from Ms. Daniels: (
[1]). I feel sad that she felt hurt by the article. I tried to make everything as well-sourced as I could. Did I do anything violating the policies of Wikipedia? I don't think I did. Anyway, how can I now come back and make this article better while at the same time stating the facts as they are presented in the media? Thanks for any help. Ms. Daniels, if you are out there, I want to say that in writing this article, I tried to stick to the facts as they were presented in journalistic sources, and I will try to be even more diligent in confirming my sources for any claims made here in the future.
Geographyinitiative (
talk) 07:10, 6 October 2019 (UTC)reply
Lead rewrite
I added a lead rewrite template. Perhaps the "who performs exorcisms" belongs somewhere on the page, but I don't think it belongs in the lead. Some serious work still needs to be done on this, for sure.
Plandu (
talk) 05:17, 20 October 2019 (UTC)reply