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Reviewer: Kosack ( talk · contribs) 06:07, 7 July 2018 (UTC)
I'll take this one, will post review soon.
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Unfortunately, I believe that this article is not ready for GA status. I began reviewing the article but found serious issues with grammar and numerous sentences were somewhat confusing and incoherent. I'm hazarding a guess that perhaps English is not your first language? I would suggest making a request with the Guild of Copy Editors to seek assistance and tighten up the prose and iron out any grammar issues. I'll post what other issues I found during the start of my review so that you can also fix those before renominating following some further work.
That's as far as I got with the review. Please feel free to nominate again once the issues I mentioned regarding grammar have been fixed. Kosack ( talk) 15:02, 7 July 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Kosack ( talk · contribs) 06:07, 7 July 2018 (UTC)
I'll take this one, will post review soon.
Kosack (
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06:07, 7 July 2018 (UTC)
Unfortunately, I believe that this article is not ready for GA status. I began reviewing the article but found serious issues with grammar and numerous sentences were somewhat confusing and incoherent. I'm hazarding a guess that perhaps English is not your first language? I would suggest making a request with the Guild of Copy Editors to seek assistance and tighten up the prose and iron out any grammar issues. I'll post what other issues I found during the start of my review so that you can also fix those before renominating following some further work.
That's as far as I got with the review. Please feel free to nominate again once the issues I mentioned regarding grammar have been fixed. Kosack ( talk) 15:02, 7 July 2018 (UTC)